was an amazing read so far and I love all the amazing characters. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I am excited to keep reading about what happens next
I don't usually write reviews, but I just wanna say, this was a great story. you can tell the author doesn't a lot of time working on the plot. also his writing quality is good compared to many starting out authors.
I literally cant read the story and follow whats happening, in the first chapter alone he gets a call then gets into his car and then it jumps to he is in a car with someone and they dead leg each other? then he gets a call about a medical transport and told that it isn't a rally, then it cuts to him writing down some race cars racing results. Worse than MTL and that's really telling.
Of course I love harem novels, well, when the author makes a strong ms nayvny, it's boring (it's strange that a person has gone back to the past and is thinking about a sub-job, it already makes you wonder if it's worth reading)it's like Japanese nubo novels full of cliches. Little has been read , only 10 chapters , well , I already see the cliche of the feeble - minded ms .
Novel is a Huge let down there is such a miss leading intro, for some reason the MC starts off as like a ruthless killer but then he just changes into neutral good and it’s super boring
This story is a wild adventure of epic! With a MC that makes you feel as if you’re sitting on your best friend’s couch, watching him play games late at night and a complex structure that engulfs the reader in its world, you won’t want to put it down.
It’s evident the author has put a painstaking amount of research into video games, monsters, VR and Asian culture.
This is a story that places you in the middle of a death game and you aren’t sure if you’ll survive the next boss fight. Extremely well written and deserving of your read.
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AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
This story seems interesting. There are not as many cliches as usual in this kind of story. I am wanting to read more. I hope it is selected.
Well done. Unexpected character growth. Interesting power system. Great potential. The lead character is well written and interesting; instead of a wimpy good guy who tries to make peace, he actually seeks something akin to vengeance against those who wronged him. The story grows, and the characters seem intricate enough to support themselves. Humor may be somewhat lacking, though. Another minor issue is that the writer changes character points of view often without explanation.
Sup I'm voting out of good will, as an author who has a novel that's pretty much at the bottom rank its nice to see one that's basically made for free instead of locked chapters but it's fine to lock chapters if writing is basically ur job lol. I really wish the best for us not well known authors lmao
I'm sorry but I just can't take it anymore this novel is a cluster f**k of ideas a d sub plots that NEVER go anywhere. the author literally tries to give the MC everything like everything on top of everything and just when you think oh kool is gonna be OP nope he gets his ass kicked and dragged into a bunch of crap honestly I don't even think this a story about the MC I think he just gets dragged around and into crap over and over and over again half it just doesn't even make sense. it's pretty pathetic. this novel has potential but it lacks focus.