raw link pleaseeeeee
Why does it say eight year old but has the harem tag??? Sussy webnovel. Pedophilia isn't something to advertise. Hopefully he grows up into an adult before that harem tag comes into play
Well, i like this novel and we are from the same country, so i just hope you didn't drop this novel, like others author from this country!!! .........................................................................................
at chapter 45 and I think it is a good read, the premise is common but the characters are intriguing.
but I think the author made the MC too OP while lacking much life experience from any of his two lives which just leaves him not knowing what to do with his power and leaves the mc in a very passive state to the plot. there are reasons for his naivety, from his previous life his old habits carried on but the fact that he doesn't seem to be learning or progressing as a character and the way his behavior doesn't really match his actual age is a bit off putting. but I believe there's still a long way to go and the author seems to have lots of ideas in store for this novel
The story you’re writing is very good. Cant wait to see what steps the mc takes next [img=update] you should also put this on the fanfic section so more people can see this fic
Heyyah!!!
One thing that I'd say is that this book caught my attention from the very first look of the synopsis
Hello, author here! I hope the readers enjoy this completed story of mine! It took a couple of months to finish it and with issues of writer's block with my other stories, I was able to finally complete this story in 2 Volumes, which was my goal for this novel! I hope everyone enjoys the main characters and the plot of the story!
Please do not abandon this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story development and I can see the writer has a set plot for the story. This is good.
I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.
the quality of translation is worsing with time and the plot is becoming boring. he could have done a lot of things explored a lot of places. instead he thinks himself something great also bored that the players aro no challenge to him. as if asking for problems problems arrive. the last plot twists are really nonsensical. if you want you can read but don't expect much. last thing the number of repeated chapters is not small
this novel has been dropped don't waste your coins.