How ironic because this story is in trial read now someone posted it here lol
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Today a man knocked on my door and asked for a small donation towards the local swimming pool.. and me being a generous man that i am gave him a glass of water... I love supporting the community.
Hello guys, Kyosei here, I know my update stability is very very slow that I am honestly not sure what to do about it. It might take me a while before I reach the 100th chapter but bear with me. The chapters will be slow for a while in this novel because all my attention was focused on my contracted novel. I have to earn money or I can't pay for my expenses every day. I also have work I need to focus on so I am quite having a hard time writing a single chapter and if I have to push myself, I ended up sleeping due to fatigue. But once I finish the Chat group for Magicians, the updates will be frequent again. Thanks for everyone that still sticks around.
its mad good!!!!!! the mc is an athletic chad
the story development is good and every chapter shows us more of the world.
its pretty pog!!!!
i would read this over hentai anyday
a VERY intriguing plot... the synopsis does its job of attracting the readers and the very first chapter makes you know the characters which to me is very interesting. Looking forward to completing the read.
56 chapters only.
I can only give you 1 star if you rob me of my chapters.
Sorry
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Love the concept and characters! Please keep making new chapters as I think It is a very good book so far!
So ill start with the postives and ill work into the things i think need work
You have a good system style for the system genre i like the style of rapid growth with small bonuses collected from multiple worlds style
I love your world building so far you could probably be a very talented DM for dungeons and dragons and i respect the quality
Your male characters overwhelmingly are well written and varied even the assholeish Second hero
Cons- mostly just to deal with the AMOUNT of harem girls you seem to have planned its overwhelming and itll be impossible to even remeber their names i think if you are seriously planning for 60 girls
And this brings up the other topics even the “main Wife” vibe character just screams generic harem fodder your female characters need some variance because even the stealth girl in the second world i literally saw the begrudging attraction first chapter after their meeting i can accept fate makes these girls fall for protagonist but it needs some more finesse to not just have the worst self fulfillment fanfic vibe
The whole series is a great read jumping for one great idea to the next. Definitely keeping you on your toes definitely recommend giving it a shot