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This is written By Overlord Venus. That alone is enough to prove that this novel is of high tier quality. But even so, I'll give my review so you will have better understanding of the novel with no spoilers.
Writing Quality: As I said before, its high tier. The author described the scenes of the novel vividly to increase the immersion while keeping it not too much to prevent info dump.
Story Development: From what I have read, it's one of the best post apocalypse novel out there with huge potential of becoming a top novel. The novel revolves around mc regressing back to the past with the help of a leader of a Post Apocalypse Dispatch Society.
Character Design: The Author didn't let me down on this. All of the characters felt real. As if you are interacting with a real person. Their actions doesn't feel one dimensional.
Updating Stability: Although there are only two chapters at the time I gave this review, the author updates frequently from his other novels so he will likely do the same to this novel.
World Background: Not much is known from what I read except for it being in the same universe and timeline as the author's other novel titled I Hate Systems.
Overall: A must read, a masterpiece! The author has lots of writing experience so this novel would be one of his best! I suggest you read and give it a try!
amazing story, amazing author, details yet no over detailing.
Clear progression and change.
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Just read it.
Its one of the best out there.
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Wow this novel started out great but absolutely sucks now. Not sure why this is rated so highly, started reading it for the dark grimy mood but turned into a cheesefest with **** comedy. Not for me, and funny how the Author ignores every constructive criticism and only responds to positive ones. Well I doubt the novel changes much but I don’t really want to waste my time reading this. And the is married after 10 chapters lol. What a way to ruin it.
After reading 79 chapters, I found the story mostly annoying and frustrating before I had to just put it down. Do you like a main character that leaves loot on the ground and refuses to look out for himself because he expects the author to hand him what he needs when he needs it? Do you like a main character who refuses to bathe or wear anything but blood covered rags because he prefers to look and smell like swine? do you like main characters that get good weapons handed to them but refuse to use them and just punch everything? Do you like a main character that shows all his enemies his secrets, but will irrationally keep secrets only when it hurts his own opportunities just because. Do you like an MC whose "cultivation" is only described as visualizing a demon head? Not a joke. That's it. I don't. I feel personally insulted. Er Gen has put in minimal effort on this one. I think maybe Er Gen fed an AI a bunch of cultivation novels, and this is the novel it vomited out.
Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.
SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)
Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.
Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.
Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.
Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.
Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)
World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.
The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.
im expecting an op mc but it looks likes mc is weak and its fuvking annoying that author boast his talentless everytime to make him cool for us readers but in truth mc is so lame and weak weak weak ............
im wondering why they keep posting novels like this here ...
im sure lot of readers is tired of this kind of cliche novels and its plot is just the same always its really annoying that everytime mc walks around he always meets some idiotic characters just to author boast the mc too much
Bruh that game sounded perfect, are aliens the only hope left of having good games?
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Total Rip off from world of warcraft. :(
Too lazy world setting and characters.
No-where near TKA, Reincarnated Thief, Zhang Long etc.
Translation is fine tho.
This is really awesome! It’s definitely one of the better written fictions on this site and I like the concept behind it. If your looking for something fun give it a try! Keep up the great work author!
Good story. Story development is okay. Liked the character. World background is great. writing quality is good and unique. Keep the great work author.
Good novel so far, I've currently read up to 33 chapters and although not top tier, it has the the potential to be. Once it shows more of its potential I'll upgrade this rating to five.
