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From what I see the stability of the updates is nice - not that I look at that normally, as I know myself that sometimes it's difficult to write and post all the time ^^ I like the language used here - not too fancy, but not too basic. Perfect in-between so that even people who aren't native to English may enjoy the story without getting confused.As for characters - what I loved most was when I spotted a Polish name (makes me wonder if you too Dear Author, like me, are Polish ;) ). It's still pretty early but I think both the characters and the world are evolving nicely.I have one recommendation - the dialogue options would be more visible and it would be easier to read if you'd use B or I with them - it is a bit tiring on the eyes without it <3I hope Dear Author you'll see this as an encouragement to keep writing. One day you'll get more words like this, so keep it up - sharing your imagination with the world is a beautiful thing, so don't stop :)
A few years ago, when people mentioned the word 'army', what came into their mind was military and national service. However, after a huge global takeover of Korean pop music, ARMY had been given a new definition thanks to the boy band BTS.
I support this novel, it's an interesting name, a good script writing, and I'm waiting for the next chapter
This is a great novel with many great characters and an intriguing story, but there's quite a bit of "technically not" cheating/ntr that's just to much for me.I hoped I would get used to it but I didn't.If you think you can handle it then this is a must read in my humble, unbiased and totally not Futa obsessed opinion.And if you can't, trust me and get out.I wish the author the best of luck.Long af review out.ps.Dragongirl best girl
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Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
one of the best transmigration story that I've ever read . i strongly recommend this book .this story is amazing . I've been reading many transmigration stories and this, THIS IS ONE OF THE BEEEST .- the pacing is EVERYTHING . the pacing in this book is really good .the author did not just skim through everything and gave many details that made the story better.- the FL is not OP, i mean yes she was a very remarkable assassin in her past life but that's it .she doesn't know medicine and other whatnots .what i mean is she doesn't know almost everything unlike other FLs .- the first story where i stayed even though the FL does not have the memory of her current body. Usually i leave when the FL does not have the body's memory because i don't like it when the FL is clueless in her surroundings and just guess her way through . But in this story, yes, the FL does not have the memories but it doesn't feel wrong .I guess because she's just a child .also, her interactions with other characters is not affected because of this absence. - this is a story where the our main character (which is the FL) did not really became the 'main character' of the story .what i mean is that she did not replace the 'original main character' of the book which is good .- the interaction between FL and ML is really cute even though they're inly a little .anyway, just read this .
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i love it
Its not my type of novel, more likely it was my first time reading this kind of genre but I was already hooked with how the character was portrayed, I found myself laughing at some funny parts. The novel is well written too, so I had a smooth read and enjoyed it.
Nice start. Perhaps we have the same interests. However, I hope yours wouldn't be satirical, pessimistic and sarcastic as mine (intentional on my part). So far I have yet to see a deeper characterization in your novel, although I am asking too much for a novel that just started. I wonder how this novel would distinguish itself from mine. Good luck and more power to your novel! ?