"This story is a complete waste of time .It feels a lot like soulland but it is crap man,and u r supposed to be a writter and u dare use my name first name "
"It will." Jeric grabs Cristina's hand and gives her his shirt. "Just do it, okay? Wear it."
"I want to make love to this pancake. I have never felt an emotion so strongly before, I feel like I'm in love!"
"Hello? If you're not speaking, I'll end the call now."
This is mad interesting ?☺️?
(Kai)
I know what I said before, and I actually planned to post the chapters today, but my wife had some complications at childbirth, she went through an aminiotic fluid embolus, thank goodness my wife survived, but she is healing and I I had to take care of everything for now, so I apologize for not being able to keep the promise, and I ask your understanding, as soon as my situation stabilizes I will post the chapters.
Sakura gave a gentle smile. "I'm not leaving you, I'm going to fight that thing and win. So be ready!" She shouted and jumped up. The suction immediately caught her and pulled her in. The wind stopped and the black haze turned into a small, solid ball that reflected the child's face.
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One day, the familiar old man came and opened the cage.
100 years in the mortal world is actually 10,000 years in the immortal world. When they found out about this, they were surprised.
I am a big fan of post apocalypse novels and when I was looking at this one I saw it had a game like element so I thought I was in for a great read. But as it turns out this novel is a huge disappointment. The translation is so bad and has so many grammar and continuity errors that it pulls you out of the story. But that's not even the worst part! The Mc is hands down the most inconsistent character I have ever seen In all my years reading novels. He can walk in a room see someone and then for no apparent reason have such a deep connection that they are willing to die for each other. I mean??????? What? Who is that? ooooo you use to know her from kindergarten? Ok let's kidnap her and kill her boyfriend she'll be ok with it in a couple of weeks. (That's real by the way not the kindergarten bit but the rest of it is in the book) WHAT!! Why just to add another Harem member?......And the Harem is so bad as he seemed to treat women as consumables and tools as he will use them, drop them and get a newer one. I don't usually mind novels that have breaks in them but that have to be earned and NONE OF THEM ARE! I mean come on in one her literally raped her abandoned her then finds her again kidnapped her killing her boyfriend and innocents of the town and then raped her AGAIN! And it was at that point I lost all hope in this novel sorry but I just can't ignore All that and still route for the Mc no matter how much I love the genre. All and all this was a very promising novel that turned out to be crap.