well this novel is good but its kinda look gay.im not saying that I hate gays but I thought the MC is straight well overall the story is good
One of the best, something i was waiting every day, after stop of translations i cancelled my subscribe.
This story has a slow pace to it. It develops the characters so you feel a connection with them. I love how the author chooses to tell the story how he wants. There are to many authors that try to conform to the comments and change for them. This author wants his story to be told how he feels it should. This story has sent me on an emotional rolloercoster. It makes you wounder what direction the plot will take knowing that anything is game. This story should be made into a book and shown to the world. No other person can grasp the issues that others face like this author.
This is beyond amazing. The book was superb. Character buildup was on top. Goodjob author. Love the book. Nothing is missing. It has everythinf
I have through most of the chapters and I have no words to describe how wonderful this novel has been to read. It is one of the best I have ever read. Nice work, Author. Keep it up :D
I love this Novel! I even decided to use more than 6 fast passes on it! even if im on chapter 49- it's still extremely good! I recommend this to all of you who see this!
Loving this novel, there are sometimes grammatical errors, but the author checks the comments often and fixes them, as I can speak from experience as I often help correct said errors. This novel is a great read!!! KEEP IT UP AUTHOR
Really enjoying this book so far. Hope it gains momentum and moves up the rankings. .
I honestly like the story. Everything is good about it. Nothing revolutionary or game-changing but it is interesting. MC and System interactions are smth new and cool. The story is pretty much crack and has nice humour. There are not enough chapters tho. If you want a light read where you won't have to overwork your brain cells definitely recommended. I personally LOVE storeowner stories, most of them are stupid, this one tho is quite cute and fun. Keep up the good work author! <3
a story ruined by the author who thinks treating his audience like idiots would make for a good story. Add to that a main character who despite being an adult has the mind of a 13 yr old boy with too many hormones raging through his system. Evey good looking girl has to be slobbered over in his mind, it is really disgusting and no wonder that women are completely fed up with guys who say these things out loud. Not all readers are male and not all readers enjoy the lewd thoughts of a guy who is supposed to have outgrown those thoughts long before he even transmigrated.The writing quality is horrible too because too often the author wants to explain how the world works through conversations that the main character has. The problem with this is that inevitably the questions are about subjects where the answer is fairly obvious as a result most of what is discussed just make the main character look dumb, look like someone who doesn't have the ability to make inferences from publicly available knowledge but most of all it make the reader look dumb because the author assumes that these are the questions that the reader wants answered, this is the knowledge the reader needs to know while the majority of it the reader already knows just from the author writing about the world. It is much better to let a narrator explain how it works and cover the mc's lack of knowledge with a simple 'he asked several questions' line that is than followed by the narrator explaining / stating how it works.
The system giving him servants(or followers, whatever you want to call them) who is subservient to him is somewhat insulting.The sect leader lady completely lost her personality.I feel like that three potentially strong female characters just devolved onto mindless followers... That being said I did like the outline of the story although it dis feel astonishingly similarly to a novel I have read before. But I am reserving judgement since I have read only 72 chapters. I did think it would have been better for him to just sell wine since he is an aspiring? wine God but this is good too. Also I feel like the villains are too idiotic and don't have any good information network to understand they are horribly outclassed. I wish they could be a bit more fleshed out and intelligent. There are a lot of cliches and overused plot themes. Hair trigger cannon fodder villains, arrogant females who gets swayed by his looks or power, rich scions who gets won over by the amazing food and wine, greedy experts who wants to snatch MC's possessions, an astonished mob......
Love the novel though author please keep on update stability or else it's an 5 star!!! Btw anyone knows more yandere novels???? There ain't any if i search in tho there are some like the conqueror path they don't even have yandere tag like some hidden like it???