Let the returner save the world that's not my problem. I won't run around playing hero instead I'll build a kingdom like no other and nothing will stop me. why? Cause am better than the returner
I drop this novel after 8 chap. bcoz mc share his secret with his parents that he is reincarnated. and mc parents are like "OK ,NO PROBLEM YOU ARE STILL OUR SON".LOLif it was me i would have directly kill the mf.
how can a novel be so bad............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................?
Great read! If no more chapters are added, it would be a travesty. If you have not read this story yet, your missing out. If you like books with interesting systems and like it when shady folk get The proverbial slap to the face then this iS the story for you.
great story and would love to read more but the the use full paragraphs to say repeatedly say one thing is beyond annoying not to mention the lack of specific with guns. sniper is mentioned multiple times but what kind? auto? bolt? 50cal? overall its fine when free but doesnt get better for paid chapters.
Nice start. Perhaps we have the same interests. However, I hope yours wouldn't be satirical, pessimistic and sarcastic as mine (intentional on my part). So far I have yet to see a deeper characterization in your novel, although I am asking too much for a novel that just started. I wonder how this novel would distinguish itself from mine. Good luck and more power to your novel! ?
the whole bro this and bro that is so annoying the story idea isn't bad but just can't get past how he talks I have lived in California where the surfers are and even they never said bro that much
