I really love these kind of MCs. Yes! Please destroy them all! It's been so long since I felt real anger just by reading a novel. His family are too petty I can't! And the audacity of his girlfriend! By the way, I like the pace of this one keep it up!
In the face of hardship, Roy did not give up his hope for life, he appreciated the first rays of the morning sun and cheered himself up.[img=coins]
I'll be waiting..................................................................................................................................
raw 功法都有熟练度
the story is not bad but get stale for me after 170 chapters. but one thing for sure if this wants to get picked, that is the translation quality has to go up. One week worth? seriously? 一周 usually mean one complete cycle in cultivation term.
Barely any cliches, good grammar, updates good, bunch of free chapters, all characters feel unique, captivating plot that makes me wonder "will this happen or is he this"
gosh one of the best novel I've ever read so far.
I like how the author don't rush with the story but takes time and gives the best to let the readers enjoy it.
Keep up the Good work, Author.
Lets make something clear, i think the author dropped the novel around chapter 88 (when the mc got a Supreme Order token as a reward)then another author picked it up, and that was a disaster during that arc and after it the novel became soo trash it was (meh ~ ok ~ not bad) before but after 88 it became trash tier novel.sad :,,,,(
wow i wonder how this review got here. personally haven't read it yet but the authors work is very good and saw the concept behind this story. give it a shot.
The story development has been great! Also the characters are relatable and hilarious. There is a lot of potentional and I can't wait to see the story the author has planned ahead for the MC.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
read raw to like 1k chapter
MC still super weak
not even full wizard
story is super slow. too much water.
better spent time on other novel
Well. First things first, the grammar could use some work. It is readable, although I can't deny that it hurts my eyes and this is coming from a brasilian writer who also struggles with english grammar! The main plot also seems to be initially just your everyday typical VR novel although it quickly switched to the stereotype reincarnation with a system. The MC just seems to be one of those dumbasses and probably he is gonna end up just like those clichê protagonists. For the good points, although the grammar is pretty bad I can't say it's the worst I've ever seen since I saw things that could make anyone feel the desire to drink bleach and put clorox on their eyes, so congrats because your novel is nowhere near close those garbages. Despite this story being quite my cup of tea I can say this author has a lot of potential for future growth so I'm looking forward to your future stories. Everyone needs to start somewhere, even the first chapters of my first novel are also pretty bad.
Sorry for being harsh on the review but I decided to be honest here, it is going to surely help you in the future.