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I love the character of Anna, and her going into the VR world, and it was a fun read. I enjoyed it, and I think it deserves 5/5 stars for the plot.
Alryt, nice story I must say. Your writing quality is great. You got a nice flow I give u that. But you might want to cut down your paragraphs in your second and third chapter. Cos in those chapters, you have lots of important info... So making it long, made my head ache some more with my headache.
I had to focus so much or I wud av lost what the paragraph was saying. Normally a paragraph shud b btw 3-5 if I am not mistaken.
Little or no typos, great book n plotline author. It shows author knows what he is doing. Added to my library, would love to see where this is going. Nice work, keep it up.
Yes i knek the Authors shamless self rate but guess what i dont care i just really hope everyone likes my novel and dont forget to tell your famiky and friends ha jk but seriously I hope you all enjoy the novel it means a lot to me.
except for some parts l really appreciate good stories like this one. l hope that it continues to the very end,.................................
Okay so I don't think this is 5 stars but I have done this to balance out from the one stars given cause honestly I am baffled at how they have rated it this low.
For me, this is my favourite book out of all the trail ones. All of them saying this story is about the same old trou** etc is lying straight out of there ass.
Honestly, this book is a breath of fresh air from the ordinary cultivation novels. Yes the mc is op af and it is kinda a wish fulfilment story, however, it is done in a way it suits the world. So he doesn't just get a wish to be god reality-bending powers etc
I say it is a breath of fresh air for cultivation books because literally, every other cultivation novel is about how the mc is weak, he finds some ultimate secret treasure, power etc then he fights his way up the ladder... THIS is the troup we are all used to.
This book doesn't have this. He is called the divine child, born from a top tier clan. It's kinda like he has the starting point from the general villains of these type of stories. A fact I love.
Then you have the mc making fun of all the trou** that others in that world have. Such as grampa in a ring, secret bloodline etc
For people to say this is following the same old troup is baffling to me. Like, have you even read the fcking story? It is completely different from the general...
Overall, If you like reading a weak mc grow up strong as we have already one hundred times then you won't like this story. It's like a light read and just a breath of fresh air from the same old cultivation books.
I don't often rate but this really is an interesting read. I like the world and the potential it has even if it might seem somewhat slow at this time. I would like to see where this goes and would recommend trying it because it doesn't hurt. I don't normal rate let alone give 5 stars
I really like this novel but the chapters are a bit short but I think it’s great
Garbage system and mc with garbage personality combo.
Just like many of its garbage kind.
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Easily the best book I have read in a long time. Enough of the crybaby MCs and more like this!!!!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Roll them out lol
I Don't read it yet i just hope it can be good and the MC is truly shameless.
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