Спасибо за отличную историю. Очень приятный текст, к сожалению Английский язык не знаю, но воспользовавшись Google translate получил весьма хороший текст. Замечательные персонажи и хороший юмор делают это произведение превосходным. Очень сожалею что последняя глава вышла аж 3 года назад, что значит что продолжение врятле будет, жаль(
My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place.
Two volumes have been completed.
First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones.
Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development.
Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.
Really Nice world building and good pace on the history. I think this series deserves more attention , specially when compared worth the majority of novels out there, and will be worth your time
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As of now I think this novel could reach far. The way his cheat works is interesting and at the same time not easy to trigger. ( In the sense that he needs to work hard for it) There are limitations to it and could make future plots interesting as long as the author isn't dumb.
In total I'd say it's worth a read and should be picked this week.
1 chapter already killing your brain.
1 chapter already killing your brain.
1 chapter already killing your brain.
1 chapter already killing your brain.
Please I love your book so much author that I found myself getting addicted to it. Each passing day, I crave to read a chap that will lead to tens and twenty more.
This book is truly awesome, English is simple and clear....easy to understand. The characters are wonderful, the plot is great. Keep up author!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
All that premise gone down the drain....................................
Really like the story. Still only around 20 chapters, but it's still so good. Like the mc and his strength development. So its a new and very interesting story on this site.
Real Score: 3.5/5 (Because I Hate Webnovel's scoring system.)
"A Genuinely Good Story that I'm not Going to Finish." Or "Pokemon for Teens, who want that Blood."
First off, I'm going to say that I liked this book. And it was Ok. Would I recommend it? Not Really. But If you want some Teen-Pokemon action that isn't Cursed or a Edgelord's wet dream, then it's ok.
Secondly, that's all I got.
Look it's ok. Ya got cute Little Baby mons, and Rad looking Adult Mons. It's just pokemon set in a world where the story takes that concept seriously.
And it's good up to ch 40. (because I don't want to pay for more, and can you really recommend something to anyone on that premise.)
The story comes, dangerously, close to cultivation novel territory in the legendary beast ark but other than that, it's a fine little story.
I am curious. Does he ever (or does he plan to) go back to his first world and get revenge on his mother, father, and "girlfriend" as well as reunite with his sisters?