Ok, Hide had did it again with a new novel and an amazing cover to put the cherry on the topping. Reading the first few chapters, I can tell he had improvised and changed his writing structure to be more WN friendly. As a reader, I'm applaud by his effort and technique to write such a griping storyline that immersed the readers into the world of the MC.
I don’t understand it. This novel is game/system based, and yet I haven’t even stopped reading it since I found this book this morning. I am already at chapter 100, and I am wanting to read so much more of it. It flows well, hardly has unnecessary exposition, has great dialog and action sequences. It is a well thought out book with great pacing. Good job! No! GREAT JOB!
Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley aren't Investment Corporations...
If you use real companies at least get it right.
Not sure if author, or if translator westernized it and trolled
bad. I hate romance because it's never ever done right and just feels forced but I hate harem even more. I hate when MCs are forced into a situation and simply go with it even though they don't agree but they feel they are trapped when in reality they aren't. I hate when the MC leads on female characters intentionally or not instead of drawing a clear line and ending the stupid misunderstandinds.
I am not getting younger and my tolerance for stupid crap is also waning.
The story is same old 'copy and paste' formula but I don't mind, just all the above killed me.
I'm Out.
the synopsis almost made me ignore this novel ... they should change it.........................................................................................................
did you say system?
Not sure, how many Chapters, it says I've read, but I read it before it was on Qidan.
It was one of my first before I knew of mainstream novels such as Desolate Era, Coiling Dragon, Stellar Transformations and etc.
(Note, their author)
During the time I read it, it was one of my favorites.
(The bar was pretty low back then, as I didn't know the above novels)
Story Development, Character Design and World Building are slightly reminiscent of Martial God Asura in repetitiveness.
But, as long as they don't keep continuing, like Martial God Asura, and stop somewhere such as #### Stage, instead of finding a higher Realm and continuing the same thing as the beginning.
They should be fine
Read up to chapter 15, normally I don't quit so early but the MC is just annoying. Acting like he is at the pinnacle when he is only at the starting line. Doesn't matter if he has all this knowledge, if you are a small fish acting like a shark in a big pond, well you should get eaten for your efforts. Not smart story telling, more like this guy is living through his own dreamscape.
The biggest mistake of this author wasn't that he created this stupid MC.
The biggest mistake was that he made that absurd background of MC building multi-billion dollar company in 5 years from scratch Iike Cmon.
Giving up 75 chapters in. Either the story was written quite poorly or the translation's butchering the story.
Its quite quite difficult to follow whats happening for several reasons including missing or slightly malformed sentences which make it quite difficult to understand what is happening and make you think you may have missed a paragraph, An overreliance on Chinese poems religon and mythology which could work if any of it were explained - as it stands it just seems like a way of extending the text.
Overall it had potential but I don't think it'll ever really be worth reading.
This is a very good novel it takes a twist on the normal vrmmo novels with it being set in a underworld type of game! Personally I feel like it is very interesting because of the game mechanics and how the race against time is ****** him make un-normal decisions to make money.
Still relatively new I would give it a couple more chapters before making a true review....................... . . . . . . . . . . . . . dam this needs 140 characters to work lol will take a while.