This is pretty good! I love the writing style of this book. I love how the author depicted the atmosphere and how the author showed the character's trait.Also has a bit of humor, which is always great! Hehe!Great job, author! Wishing you good luck! <3
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Thank you very much for clearing all this up. This is going to help me write my novel with much more fluidity. For all those aspiring authors out there chesck this out, it will really help you out
An upgrade system? Truly a novel i dont want to read tbh but i have no choice i cant help but at least give every trial read novel a try unless the synopsis has stuff about romance or harem in it.
-Writing Quality-I do not believe you are a native English speaker, you're doing well so far with the writing portion; However, in concern to the quality, I do believe it could use some improvement. Author, you're making grammatical errors even some 2nd graders ( Begging of Elementary School) do not make, even so, these are small mistakes that lead to larger issues. Better to clip them at the source and fix them early on, they're just relatively small mistakes, only there are a bunch of them.-Stability of Updates-It is far too soon to right on this, but from what I surmise, the updates are regularly implemented into the list. This is decent, it is good to have frequent updates. In comparison, do not "blow your steam
It has game elements and a system. MC is cunning and gives off Devil's Cage kinda vibes. His power is pretty cool too. He gets points which can make his abilities better when he eats monsters. Written really well.Some places made me feel that translation could've been a bit better. Otherwise it's really good.
After peering deep into the author's soul I have learned that he needs a pic of his favorite cat to motivate him into write more.~~~~~~~~~~~
So I know the author is extremely sensitive in hearing negative reviews, but I have to be honest. As much as the premise does to serve the fans with things they (including myself) would like (such as VRMMO concepts, Romance, Strong powers etc.) It has a very important issue of execution. From the first chapter, I can quote what others have been saying which boils down to it "being all over the place". It tells us what is going on rather than showing, but in a very loose method. It does not keep a focus and ultimately, becomes uncomfortable to read. Each chapter should have a purpose. The *flow* and *transitioning* of each sentence and paragraph should be strong and easy to follow through. What I would advise is for the author to look at *how* other authors write their books. Yes, I say "how" becasue I feel that the writing style needs to change. It can get exhausting, especially if a lot of chapters have been completed. Let's say you learned a lot from other books and finally came up with a better style – it'd take a long time to fix all of it. I understand. However, if that's the case I would get an editor to help you out. There's plenty of authors who would do that in the discord for Webnovel/RoyalRoad. For other works, I'd analyze how Sword Art Online, Rising of the Shield Hero or Library of Heaven's Path wrote their chapters and their style of conveying their messages to their audience. Plot wise, make sure when writing a scene to imagine how the readers will feel about that scene when comparing it to the *previous chapters*. For example, if the main cast fought and won against a guild of people but then suffers against several weaker hunters later on, there should be a reason *why* they are struggling in the very least, or else it will leave them confused. Overall, great job with nearly 3 million views and good luck with the rest! ??
so another book by ChanduGod...noice start and have great potential! don't drop it and release more!! ??hope it is a good harem like martial transcendence.
Guys, just want to remind you all that this novel has been dropped by the author. news source is from MTLNOVEL.you know, im sad that this novel have stopped updating since this novel is out on trial read.i thought it was because of tge author is resting but the fact is it was dropped. So if you guys don't want to read an incomplete novel, better not read this.
It's decent. Nothing much to say here, as the only thing the MC has really been doing is preparing for the college examination for 20 chapters.
Plotholes aplenty alongside a pussy MC makes me not even want to read this novel. Side characters are NPCs and the novel is 3 at best (doesn't deserve the 5 star rating imo). Stop fake reviewing other people and actually review said novel dummies. Just for the fake reviews I'm tossing it down to 2 stars.