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It was a good read. From begining all characters had a part to play and the development was good.Despite the grammar and spelling that can be overlooked progression was good.
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The story is interesting and has great potential
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It's a good but a pity its not free anymore i love reading it when I have a free time the characters have a unique impact in different situations also it need a more word of visualization to immerse the reader that's all angAuthor thank you
This story deserves more chapters. It's been a while since you last updated it. There were some flaws in the writing, but other than that, it was okay. Keep it up.
it is an overall nice novel but can you please change Or rewrite the name of the novel it does not match the story of the novel.
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Overall, story isn't bad. Plot seems believable, but some parts are kind of rushed. Please get a good editor and fix all those grammar mistakes - don't just use google translate or thesaurus. Also, don't drag out and mansplain too much.
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