Main character is overpower but also is very smart and likeable . I'm glad this main character are not like others overpower mc , ( who's don't think the consequences of offending another powerhouse and also very arrogant . Yeah you're the main character but that doesn't mean you can do anything and latter regret it ) . This main character is very smart ,for hiding his face , name and power ( some author even forget to hide their mc face when facing enemy ) . The power development is very detailed and op ( but consider the god , seven virtue and others entity ) . The side story maybe too long . Overall for me , its very nice orginal novel , that suit my taste of overpower mc .Note : English is my second language so i'm sorry for the pronouns or misspelling
While the idea behind the story is good, it pains me to say that the poor writing quality makes it unenjoyable. There are too many dialogues, but we have no idea about how the character feels, what they were doing, or what's the situation surrounding them. It lacks proper explanation. This work might be more appropriate as a theater script.Also, as I've mentioned in many of my reviews, proper punctuation is important. Thats what makes a sentence can be easily comprehended. If the author makes no visible improvement in the future, I'm afraid I can't go on reading this. Sorry.
Overall the tone of the story is set from the beginning. I can't see any grammar mistake and the character has its own space when the chapters go forward. keep up good work author.
I loved this novel .There are few grammatical mistakes here and there but we can omit them. I just feel that the updating pattern is too slow ? . please update more .
Remember reading this in a forum. Its not that bad actually. Reason to 5 star, i just cant stand seing a game element rate to low.So... bite me.Not 140 char yet.
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amazing novel until 200 Chapter after 183 Chapter it becomes concidence chichè. let's take one example trying to find one organisation and by mistakes mc got wind from totally different sources nothing to do fbi(until later) guess what fbi also got it same time . guess what they meet on airport . guess what when they were leaving they sit on same chairs. guess what they again meet after 3 or 5 chapter totally different situation but same fbi ppl . guess what you can bleed in game guess what it will not disappear . guess what npc are I intelligence that they can tell what species it is just after seeing blood. guess what vampire king is idiot king . (who make him king?) . guess what FBI can find out what mc did in last hour but couldn't find a blast which is going to happen in park (solved because of mc).
Hope there is more to it and it will be a complete novel. Mc is good. Storyline is great. Hopefully it will boy stop half way and maintain its release on regular timing.
After years of study on literature and novels in general, I have finally had a revelation. Cultivation novels are retard magnets that try to forcefully make the reader feel smarter. I have read so many comments, in cultivation novels specifically, that make me want to bash my head into a wall that I can no longer not say this.Wait a minuteWhat if I'm mistaken? You see, most cultivation novels have a certain tag next to it: Harem. That's it! Harem novels are the true retard magnets! That's why ever fanfic harem novel I've ever read has made me want to puke my guts out! I can see clearly now!
I would love to know when they start to upload new caps because we are near the end and paused without noticeThank you...............................................
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Actual Trash? Literally no creativity, just lucky dude in modern world.Guy finds 5000 year old urn while fishing, with his family name on it, turn out he's royalty of an ancient chinese dynasty, wow.Faceslaps ex, ex-boss, etc.That's it, nothing else.