woahhh nice story got really enjoy it....moreeeeeeeerreeeeerreeeee
Mc starts off in real estate which is what I liked, But then changes into an action movie with bed guys coming out the wood work on top of that the Mc has daddy issues and is blinded by the need to be acknowledged also geography is off because mexico and Switzerland have a international train together???
Honestly it's kinda boring. Typical "being an animal and eating other animals to evolve" plot, except the MC has so many cheats (time travel, system, getting the abilities of the animals he kills), that there's basically never any real tension.
its good in my opinion although the cultivation ranks could get confusing
I think you have a good book going here, the character is decently op, he's got a relatable backstory and the setting is just right. The fighting is pretty intense, I can tell you have a love of martial arts from it. I'd say you gotta keep writing, however, you gotta pace the story, make it flow with the reader, and work on the book's grammar, otherwise, you have got a great story!
3 stars was really well done with great potential. unfortunately for me there wasn't enough content for me to be interested enough to invest
Nice begining, but no updates
one of my favorites on GoodNovel!!
Loved it! I can't wait for the next one!❤️
more more more.story..intetesting
this is really getting interesting more
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