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Zack Blake. A normal high school student, was leisurely studying in his classroom.

Or that was what's supposed to happen if he was normal.

He was the son of a Major Genral and became a Special Lieutenant at the age of 17 and saved his school from terrorists, only to die due to a bullet wound.

When he awoke. Yes. Awoke. He was in a completely white space and saw a black haired girl looking at him.

"Hello, Zack. I'm an Overseer named Alia. And welcome to my realm"

Given a choice to die as is or be sent into another world, what will he do?

Watch over Zack as he tries to survive and enjoy a world of swords and magic full of action, mystery and adventure by battling demons, humans or even Gods.

Constructive Criticism is accepted. I wish to improve my writing, and this story would be the first novel i've ever written...

Updates will be posted very erratically.

If you will rate this story less than 3 stars, please do leave a review so I will know what the problem was in the story.

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currently on chapter 400 and I think this is a great novel. However, a problem i had with it was that most of the time alot of the characters know something about the secrets of the MC that the MC himself doesn't know about, at first it was okay bit it kept happening again and again that it got annoying. One more problem is that the MC seems super OP yet not OP at the same time and I'm all for it but the way its presented is annoying. He's super talented that he can absorb many crystals easily to improve and he stole alot of crystals from the academy. Moreover he has two grimoires(2 of the strongest elements),3 ancestral staffs and has high proficiency in 3 elements and he no longer has problems with his physical body due to the necklace. why the he'll does he struggle to kill the Holy Lord of wind when he was in the academy he should be able to wipe the floor with him. Moreover after Gabriel defeats izen its supposed to be something great introducing that he was a little brother of a guy on a mountain and that the world they currently live in is a desolate world takes away from the victory and makes you feel that instead of winning he failed by attracting attention of more enemies.and why does everyone know that Gabriel is karyk while he doesn't its super annoying that you just want to scream at Gabriel to figure out the obvious. To summarise 1) The others know more about the MC than the MC himself 2)The MC is not wiping the floor with others simply because of Plot instead of a good reason 3)Whenever the MC wins you figure out that the opponent beaten has a stronger opponents behind him
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Second Volume is on the way.. I apologize for the week-long break and I’m grateful for your patience.. but I would like to announce that the long wait is over.. so happy reading guys and thanks for all the reviews, rates and comments..            Qairi
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grammar: great, little errors or none at all really, cant notice when readingstory: interesting, kind of to the pointaction: amazing characters: entertaining, really like the boxing champ
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60 chapters in and he's a one trick pony prince who acts like a pauper instead of a prince. He's not only getting his fortune improved, he's also plundering material benefits without impunity or restraint.The thinking is a little small and I'm not very optimistic about how he's going to get better because let's face it: these MCs never grow emotionally, they actually just become more shameless and/or lustful.All the really important people he's helping are jade beauties too...
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Great read! If no more chapters are added, it would be a travesty. If you have not read this story yet, your missing out. If you like books with interesting systems and like it when shady folk get The proverbial slap to the face then this iS the story for you.
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