I will not say your novel is bad, because I liked the truth, if I hate the novel it will be because of Kanji and Domaine, they are scoundrels
Great cover, first of all, love it. The novel is a pretty fun read as well. System novels are rarely well done but this ones really interesting. Fantastic work on grammar as well. Hope to see more of it in the future :)
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I read this Web novel till 8 chaps and here are my thoughts
pros
1- The mc is ruthless, intelligent and overpowered
2- Not much cultivation BS, short and straight to the point explanation.
3- Good character introduction.
cons
1- Irregular updates
2- A few typos
I hope the author will release chapters regularly.
The author seems an expert bringing at bringing many genres together and weaving them perfectly - fantasy, mythology, action, war etc.
I like how strategy and humor play a role as well. If you want let your imagination run wild with historical and mythological figures, it is a must read.
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Congrats for securing a place in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)
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Seems to be a different perspective than usual, but I personally love family novels, especially when it's not just the main characters point of view. These stories of families growing and becoming powerful together just always seem to appeal to me. Hopefully this gets picked.
only chap72 but so far the story is amazing good char development this has no harem hopefully for future it wont bc harem is a big turn off that made me not wanna read certain novelsthe mc is smart and coldthere are barely if any spelling mistakes that i have noticedoverall really good novel i recommend u to read thisofc everyone has different tastes so if u dont like this novel after 5-10 chapters drop a review telling the author your opinions/thoughts or why u dont like, author-san please dont drop this early and stay safe :D
After reading some chapter's I gotta say I really enjoy your Story and it's curing me of my boredom on Webnovel. There aren't that many Stories that revolve about a Nobody that becomes someone Great. This Story has lots of potential I hope you don't mess it up. With that said I will continue reading and give more Reviews in the Future.