I to say this is a story with great potential.grammar: good overall, I did not find much in term of mistakes or grammatical errors.Flow: the flow is nice and things just fall nicely in place so there is no difficulty reading or following events.story: you could just read the synopsis, but I have to say that it's a nice touch to merge fantasy elements with the modern setting.The chapters a quite long, whether that is a plus or minus is for you to decide, I just wanted to inform you.Finally, good job to the author, you are on the right path here with a story that has a lot of potential so keep going.
author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist
We got another one!!! I really love Dual Cultivation and Cultivation Online so I’m expecting great things. Even though this isn’t a cultivation novel, I’m still really excited and looking forward to seeing how this novel turns out. I love this author.
There is only one word that can describe this novel. Marvelous! [img=recommend][img=recommend]img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Even tho webnovel jipped me on Protect our Chief i hope this novel gets picked.
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Bad, when i read this, i feel like either the author isn't thinking much when he wrote his first chapters or he thinks readers are idiots. I've only read a few but the outlook of mc is quite bad.
The item received from system is always something mc needs and he will get it no matter how low the auctioned item is, like his physique problem solved in a quite un-charistic fashion after hyping it unnecessarily
I have read the mtl for this novel.
Author draws out the story making boring to read in the long run.
Plus there are too many misunderstanding between mc and the female lead making it too complicated for the mc to resolve. Also the romance between mc and fml just suck.
I hate these types of web novels. I love the reborn as an elder in a sect(please recommend some if you know) but I hate the chatterbox systems and the "you received the supreme emperor undying strongest cultivation method" it annoying and lazy writing. the author who wrote this should be embarrassed that There story has no character. 1/10
Also we did get an introduction to the realms just a "you haven't reached bla bla bla" and so we have no clue of the MC's Standing (at least in the first chapter which I won't be reading past).
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the only bad thing about this book is that chapters are so slow in updating but apart from that everything is 5 star so dont even consider checking it later just read it ik ur bored.
Tragic case of a novel completely falling apart. I really really enjoyed the first like 50 chapters, which is why this is so painful for me. I love the mc's cheat and how op he gets, but once he starts meeting and interacting with side characters the novel becomes absolute trash. Everyone around him has no brain and is constantly worshiping him for doing the most basic things. In addition to that, he's also is dumb and does lots of other inefficient/idiotic/excessively arrogant things. Like he tells the guild leader of one of the top guilds the basics of how to set up an ambush and how to position for a boss fight and everyone around him is shocked and amazed at his "genius" ideas. There's no way you can be the guild leader of a top guild and not know to put tanks in the front and healers in the back, etc. Dropped on ch113 because the author made everyone brainless
Bro why are chapter stoped from uploading but love from India anyway bro keep up I know you must have a reson is it because of the contract with wb ..