Great story, but this author stopped putting in an actual effort to write his/her chapters and is reposting old chapters with new titles. He/She then blames it on the cache. This is severely disappointing.
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Another work of our favourite author skull looking forward of your novel
I loved the system and amusement park setting. I hope more is coming out.
Shameless author here. Thank you for all the lovely reviews. I hope you like this project. Please collect and let's journey together in this journey. See you in the comments.
Kinda interested what you have for the future
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Come on. Science is not this cult of crazy ancestors. Even if you bring back the original authors, that doesn't make them good teachers. In fact, science largely arises from criticism of the original authors and the worst, most of the time, the absence of modern tools and the absence of processing hid better scientists than those cited. At best, magic should invoke "Teachers" and they would be given the names the author prefers. Didactics alone is a bigger challenge than most people suppose, Qidian is the biggest example of this, if everyone learned Chinese easily what the need for translators is. And worse if it is so easy to learn how to write about something, why thousands reading other people's books without publishing anything decent?
So, to start with.. an OK binge read.. dont expect much from this book..
First, MC is dumb.. can't plan ahead.. can't form a stable foundation.. can't gather loyalty.. can't try to learn more about the system or loop holes..
Second, World building is trash.. tons of gangs.. 1 for each street.. then you got 4 big gangs ruling over 20 gangs each.. then you have the army..
All sounds good.. well each big gang can only get 2,000 people?? in the last chapters these guys were dying in the 1,000's so?? ok
(Each small gang has over 200 battle ready people.. so..
200X 20 = 4,000 then you have the big gangs that need to rein in these gangs so they would need over 8,000 battle ready people.. so in the last battle there should have been over 48,000 just with the gangs.. the army would need 2.5X time that to rein all of that in so they would need over 120,000 people so the last battle count for this very large city with over 80 small gangs should have been over 170,000 battle ready people.. NOT only 8,000 people with all the gangs combined + 5,000 from army)
Third, The system.. can be OP.. but nope.. in the end MC has over 600 basic mechs but they can't kill anything even when their enemies are normal people.. over 150 top tier MAX level.. can't even insta kill 1 enemy of the same level.. enemies can goku power up..
Forth, MC takes over gangs and then does nothing after.. all that ever happens is War and Pillaging.. no actual planing or thinking..
Fith, Every task needs 1 day to be done.. attack a gang? clean it tomorrow.. guys got taken? get them tomorrow.. someone has come to kill you.. kill them tomorrow..
Sixth, Dont bother remembering other peoples names.. 4 to 6 new names are added every battle MC has..
Lastly, In the last chapter of this (Chapter 60) I wrote examples of how the MC could progress faster and safer than war.. and how he has to personally kill over 10,000 people just to get 1 level 2 soul..
- Rise through the ranks with an elite team (Imperial Guards)..
- Become a spymaster (you have secure, real-time communications over unlimited distance)..
- Merchant (he's already a gang leader and only needs large quantities of cheap and low grade herbs.. high grade herbs don't give anything)..
- Theft (even bandits know to loot merchents and why take over gangs? just steal the herbs and come back a month later there are over 80+ gangs)..
- Trade between empires and continents/ sell information (MC has no obligations to stay where he is.. if anything sitting still is his biggest weakness)..
- Create a herb guild/ mercenary guild (Level 1 basic costs like 1 herb.. you could easily just create a guild of 100,000 level 1's all over an empire and even if they die.. you get 50% back no matter the distance..)
All with less risk and more benefits than straight up war..
Please reply if you can also think up more paths..
Mediocre novel. The simulations are interesting, but the real life part of the novel has so many problems. The author really dropped the ball.
5 star because it's a Master-Disciples type of novel. Hopefully it would be translated and not just be here as a false hope.................
Very bad story.
Pros :
1. Kingdom building novel.
2. Good translation.
3. Based on Mount and Blade which i like.
Cons:
1. Way to much wordpadding for make chapters bigger. They repeat the same thing like 5 times in one chapter and 3 times in the next just in case reader forgets it.
2. All the villagers in the territory are male and don't have a single name (atleast up to where I read). They seem to have emotions and talk, but for fks sake they might as well not. No names, no personality, only obeying orders.
3. MC got the memory of a goldfish. He worries about problems when the solution was something he got as a reward from a side quest just one day ago. Or maybe it was because the author made the mc forgot so he could add filler text to the novel. Such as all the way the mc COULD HAVE solved the problem if he DIDN'T HAVE the system.
4. There was one whole chapter which was just an essay about date palm trees.
TLDR; Trash novel. Hope it won't get selected.
I'm giving this review somewhat prematurely. Anyways, he's considered the mother not because he's truly transgendered(he's a tree) but rather because elves grow on him or something. I think, still early.
I rather like tree MCs. These kinds of stories tend to focus a lot on the world and characters around them rather than the MC themself. The tree is also usually outrageously powerful but limited by things like not having legs. Overall it helps balance itself out.