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Hello Author.
First of all this was my first time reading a novel totally based on "Love Story" especially highschool (without any fantasy elements).
And congrats Author you made me make a great decision---To not read any more in this kind. How can single people like me survive this kind of things.
Jokes apart, this novel is good. I liked Luke and his personality. Everything about this novel seems way tooo good, to the point you would never see anything like this in real life.
So people just thank the Author who provided this.
And trust me I am not gonna give a try for any another novel like this.
I am a guy who don't like to stop anything in the middle, untill and unless Author totally Su*ks his own work in the future.
Anyway, All the Best Author.
I read the first few chapters an i was like meh but i read more and i laughed until tears came out .
But you should edit the first chaptes and write more about cultivation realms and thier level.
Good job and keep writing
the mc doesnt feel like a mc, the other reincarnated ones feel more like an mc. lilith is more of a protagonist than the mc
the character development of mc is nearly not there at all. no uniqueness to him, no purpose in life or ambition,
Enjoyable story but chapters are too short. Wish they were longer or faster updates at least.
I'm glad you didn't drop the book. I don't care how long it takes to bring out a chapter as long as I get to keep reading your work
I say it's a good novel because of the author's tenacity to see the novel through and backed by quiteadequate skills. However, the same as most of the concerns in the review section, the MCs have inconcistent character designs. It just feels weird how they seem to be bendable to the view of the current time. Like apart from their modern knowledge, they don't reflect any modern behaviours or ideologies from our society. They feel as if a character from the 19th century suddenly receiving engineering knowledges rather than someone from the modern society that tranmigrated to the 19th century. And this defect in their designs shows how they have weak views or will coming form the modern era when they became massive simps for Carolone and Amelia. Even if Amelia wasn't a spy to their comapny or Caroline is a reincarnated individual, bruh you can't be that naive of accepting Amelia to your company when both you(MCs) and Caroline are trying to create legacies that both you only have. They don't have the sense of wariness one would expect from someone coming from the modern era who have seen it all.
Really good story, Amazing author, 100% recommend
wtf is up with the title, and u said Korean so I'm guessing mc will get ntred here too right................................................................................................................
i can only say that the system was good.... and thats it. the mc is a racist over-nationalistic chinese man, everyone who are not chinese are the enemies of china. everything chinese is superior to everything that is not chinese. this novel just highlights the fact that the author is biased and racist. also the mc is p*ssy and hypocryte in a not so funny way. poor sense of humor and too much face-slapping. also, for some unknown reason, i kinda look down on the chinese now that i read this novel.
final thoughts: i only read this because of the system, everything else is urban low-fantasy garbage.
Racist as Fuck, too many patriotic propaganda, Shitty abusive mc
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another garbage novel with "Chinese racism" where the author wishes that all races of other nations would die to benefit Chinese people and another useless MC "who is busy collecting the meat pies falling from the sky". no creativity, no proper world build (except for saying that almost all other nations people are dead and that Chinese are great and supreme). Bunch of bull crap is what this is.
Wow! I an in love with this novel. The story and plot development is awsome. The world background is also thrilling and unique. keep up the good work
