Kw0z
Interesting and refreshing introduction and progression of the story. Kinda reminds me of of the game "Life Is Strange". The flow is creative and fairly thrilling and the portrayal of the setting and the characters are put into heart and emotion.
well now....the cliches keep comin right after another.. the beginning seemed a little promising with the brothers situations juxtaposed and all.. then it felt like it turned into just the author's self fantasy
hi author, I want to suggest something
in the latest chapters, XT has some argument with Teng Qigang, now we all know TQ will contact his boss ( Cao Song). Cao song will find different way to harm / kill XT or XT's loved ones and XT will have to do much things to save them. Author, we all know this kind of story plot and it's toooooo boring
From what little I've read so far it's been a bit of a roller coaster at the .beginning and so far its been pretty funny! Hopefully this novel gets picked back up, am really sad that it feels like it might have been dropped.
:'(
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Lets make something clear, i think the author dropped the novel around chapter 88 (when the mc got a Supreme Order token as a reward)
then another author picked it up, and that was a disaster during that arc and after it the novel became soo trash it was (meh ~ ok ~ not bad) before but after 88 it became trash tier novel.
sad :,,,,(
I think its a great Book i really dont know if its a repeat or rewrite or whatever its a great story one of the best on webnovel and I hope you will update it regularly! Great dont let those haters get to you! Great book keep up the awesome work! Privileges could be priced a little more reasonably though for Sure!!!
Hello, Humble Author of this novel (See how I didn't give myself a 5 star?... very humble!).
Thanks to everyone taking the time to read my story. If you enjoy it and want to help me make it better, I'd appreciate letting me know about any mistakes in grammar or inconsistencies.
This is my first novel and English isn't my main language so please go easy on me lol.
There are quite a few obvious tropes but it's bound to be like that since I write stories that I enjoy reading...I will release bulk chapters in the beginning however at around chapter 20, it will become one per day as that would catch up to my writing speed.
why doesnt he just accept more disciples
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it a good story from what I have read till now the world building is great and in this story you see how the character of mc is built from birth, which to be honest helps you to relate to the mc
this novel has a lot of potential maybe better than the outher's other novel ,but in the end it all depends on him, only one problem that update status is not that good but other than that a good read
I am enjoying this story so far...
Great development of plot..
There is spirits, beasts, reincarnation which made this story more interesting.
what piqued my Intrest the most was MC's last life...
although there is no details about his last life till now, but from the looks of it, I know it will be filled with Mysteries.
I also want to know about MC's relationship with the mysterious lady!!
Please speed up the update and let us, the readers, enjoy your story!!
