one of favourite story so far neither too slow nor too fast paced eitherworld background is also good mc is to my liking, not my ideal one but he is very goodkeep it up author
A high fantasy novel that follows the journey of Adam, a naive little kid of humble beginnings, who stumbles upon a heaven-defying treasure that sets him down the path that most Magi could only dream of yet never hope to achieve.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the comment section. And thanks for giving this book a shot. I appreciate it!
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Good novel, a little slow but enjoyable
Great Work man
Read RWTSS, loved it and this one is also awesome
Keep up the good work
Well, shameless author here!!! This story is about a guy that is reincarnated in DC comics world, he will grow from a wimp to an OP MC, this isn't going to be overnight, he is going to work hard for it. I guess that is all i have to say at the moment and i hope you like it.:)
I actually like the novel, so continue writing as long as you can. Dont drop halfway, there are so many novels that are left halfway on wattpad. I created an account just to post a review here.
Nice one, shows a lot of promises.
Love the plot. Love the Mc's development.
I just hope the novel will have a steady chapter realise.
I'll give it a 5 star
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Nice read
• Steady world development
• No nonsense / no poorly written situation / forced development
The genre is a bit similar to The Empress' Gigolo.
This is so wholesome and satisfying. I haven't read this much wholesome and romance type novel in my whole life. I hope this work reach at top. The combination of male lead and female lead is amazing. I gave five stars because I can't find any fault in this novel. The writing quality is top notch. story development is flowing very smoothly, character design is SSS grade level, updating stability is good, and world Background is ine of the best.
I am saying if haven't read this novel you should read it now that moment you will realise this is hidden gemstone.
I have read up to chapter 8 and I believe it's enough for me to review the novel.
Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.
Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.
Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.
Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.
World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.
Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.