Gr8 story
I read after book was completed so update rate was higher. Good book and good storyline. I would like to recommend a few chapters for after the war.
Simply put, it's a novel you read to pass time as you wait for whatever it is you're waiting for. (This review is based on the story so far, written at the latest chapter of chapter 72). The literary quality in the novel is awkward due to grammatical inconsistencies, and the blatancy of the author not proofreading nor editing his/her work. The story started with a interesting premise, but is executed poorly throughout the progression of the novel. We're told the protagonist lived a rat's life in his previous world, but has a mysterious connection to the phenomena of his new world. It is interesting, but it seems the author is just parading with the novel with smoke and mirrors to make it feel mysterious but it truly isn't. Speaking of character design, all the characters are templates. The MC is one-dimensional, with no progression in character nor was there any statements that allows us to better understand him or any other character so far. His character is set in-stone and will probably never have a slight deviation from the start of the novel, or allow us to understand him or any other character better. The world background is fickle, just like a majority of translated novels. There's a lot of locations but they're never fully explored or at least given in-depth treatment to allow us to immerse in them. (The story is still in it's early stages, this just based on the story so far, hopefully it will change).
I tried to get into the story but the MC is a b complaining about everything when he has a second chance at life
I did not even beginn reading and all the Rewiews are about what a trash rasict that thing calling itself Author is.........................
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Thus far it is an interesting change of pace compared to other VRMMO novels. The MC does not play the same class as he did in the past, but picks a new one he felt had the greatest potential. The author also avoids certain cliches, though not all of them.While this is great for the story, the information on the world itself is rather lacking (but who knows, this is only ch22 so its relatively early in the novel, perhaps that'll change in the future chaps). The one thing that bugs me however is the translation quality. The translators literally copy-pasta'd the First Kill announcement of one boss for another, without changing the boss's name. So even though the MC killed one monster, the announcement was for something else he killed earlier.This just speaks of laziness. Second are all the grammar issues and missing words that leave the occasional sentence in broken English. The translators need to put more effort into the editing process. Period. Edit: After the recent chapter snafu with ch 33 & 34 and the translators not doing a single damn thing to fix it, ontop of the lazy translation, this has earned them 1 star rating. I'd give less if i could.
I really like this novel. If there is a thing I am bothered about, it's that at first the MC is overpowered and from chapter ~300 he gets pummeled by every opponent. He loses most of his fights and is only trying to get back what he lost.Otherwise, brilliant story and definitely a worthy read.
Since Author has asked sincerely, ?I might as well Review The Novel is great, Sure it's not as great as the top rankers but it has quite the potential.Just hope the Author has the ability to bring out that potentialI'm rooting for author though, Just wishes he updates his fanfic, I need a new chapter of My Adventures In The Universe??
Only the synopsis and already he and she are interchangeable. It would be foolish to take this seriously when even the TL doesn't.