hi author I'm new here hehe. so, as I was reading your story I seem to encounter a lot of redundant words in a single paragraph like 'because'. it's ruining the flow of words, can you kindly avoid doing that in the future? thanks in advance. anyway, I'm still below chapter 50. good day.
70 chapters in right now and its a very good story I really love it especially the no harem thing ? thou sometimes things goes really fast like how u skipped almost 2 planes of his cultivation and how there was really nothing much to his academic life some other ideas could have used but still I read comments and I guess quality is going to improve so I am hoping for it too be more good I hope I can give u full stars on my next review
It’s so interesting
Nice book ??
I’m so sad that it ended but I’m extremely happy because they struggle with so much heartache and they came stronger than ever! For sure it has been a journey but as Davin was a wonderful man Tyler was too, Enzo will surely be a great beta! Catherine definitely is like her father Jake!
actually nice story. but the end is too rush. some important points are not covered. so sorry i gibe 4 star due to incompleteness
love this book .Cant wait to continue to read the rest of ir
I wanted to give this story a million star!!..one of the best story I've read..it is a well -written, the plot is amazing and the writer really gave it so much thought that the details gave the story depth..I hope you continue to write more beautiful story such as this..can you write a sequel?..IDK
freaking awesome 10
looking forward to a pleasant reading experience
Very interesting book
it's interesting and beautiful