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A ****** stress free romance novel. A good weekend read. Not too long, easy writing, uncomplicated storyline and smooth writing. Suitable for reading while lounging by the pool or such. Enjoy!
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The mc has overly sensitive pride,too much if i may say. there is a lot of racism remarks that unnecessary or just too much.
A beautiful and Interesting read indeed. i am liking he way story is in process .Just hop in u won't drop the book halfway.Please give us more chapters
First of all the wrting quality of this book is excellent. It is clear making the story more engaging. The plot is smooth and story is very unqiue. I can say this is a perfect Sci-fi book. With the stable updates this will become great!!
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Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one!Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels.Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill).So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D
bem, eu particularmente gostei do livro, entretanto, tem tantos capítulos de vários personagens diferentes. isso é interessante para a construção do mundo, no entanto, fico me perguntando a relevância de certos capítulos...bem, tirando isso, a história é boa, meio devagar mas boa.
Good story! Keep it up! Synopsis is interesting and plot is well described. You have a great imagination and your writing skill is also good. Like the story very much though I couldn't read all the chapters because of time but I will be back with more time. Until then, keep updating! Fighting!
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The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)
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