A good book to pass the time. One big thing, it gets premium at 42. Sigh.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.Praise Lord Kek.
Don't mind me.. Just giving my book a 5 star review?
I like the idea of the setting and the writing style of the author. Nothing feels unnecessary or drawn out.If you like fantasy this novel could be quite interesting for you ?
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shameless writer review, check ✅ hiii, guys, do you come here often??this will be a quick paced story, the first part will happen through emails, the second part will be short and will happen like a common chapter, and this will be a shorter novel compared to my other work "Hel and the Emerald Sky City". there WILL have smut. I hope you like it ❤️
not bad, but have many failuresMC dumb and idiotdrop chapt 226 your power very slow plot armour and dramaQI 000but is goodbye..
Some chapter are in english and other in other language i don’t know can you make only English
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Really well written story and a unique world building.Its like a futuristic cyberpunk but with mysterious powers in the blend.That said, the scenes of carnage are just described using a few words. It can be expanded upon to make people feel the impact. And the paragraphing should be done properly..shorter paragraphs would be easier to read and floow.Keep up the great work
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I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways:Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it.Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.
This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.