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Some pretty good stuff. I think you do well to make his weakness bearable. The power system was just explained 30-35 chapters in but I was quite confused early on but no matter. Anyways this has some good potential and I’ll be following this (hopefully) daily, so don’t drop author :)
Great novel ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️??????????????✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️???????????✋✋✋✋✋✋✋✋✋✋?????????????????????
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So:- MC knows Kung Fu- Translation is often poor at times, and often includes errors- MC kills a lot of peopleA fun, dumb view into an old story.
The story starts off pretty strongly. I like the idea of the mc's species. I also enjoyed the various immortals and deities that aid him. However, at some point, the story takes a turn and nearly every chapter contains some lewd mention. The plot also starts to revolve around the lewd content. While some sexual content is fine, it isn't what I originally enjoyed about the story and I feel that it detracts from from the story
I'm going to be honest, this is neither good nor bad. On one hand the story development and the world's background was well done (Excluding the translation quality in the episodes above chapter 40), but on the other hand, the character in my opinion had the common sense of typical comedic characters in many comics where he immediately agrees to make any decision, even the dumb or silly ones. Overall, the character development made this novel equal in bad and good things
I agree with the other positive reviews , best story this time. Definitely give it a try bruhs,sistas. Mc is not static one dimensional boi , he will grow , our boi has grown so much already.His family is pretty nice , realistic. His mother behaves like how a typical dad would , she is overbearing. His dad goofy and supportive ,his sister op. The story will involve lots of adventuring , based on the theme of the story. Love the stat system , finally a stat system that makes sense, thank god. Mc's cheat is nice , it makes his hardwork give away way better returns. All in all , his cheat is just nice , it will draw the peeps who like cheats but won't turn away the ones who don't like them.
This book is amazing I love it.. this book made me to start reading novels Please can the author just continue this book Is incomplete I wanna see how it ends please.
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good story in modernday settingbut the author seems confuse about the system name ??hopefully this book can update much faster,i'll follow this book
The idea is promising with the MC having the ability to compute things, but quickly it becomes cliche. Our MC just stares at measurements and the female love interest is really annoying.
when is it gonna be released? when is it gonna be released? when is it gonna be released? when is it gonna be released? when is it gonna be released?
