Its trash. Not only is it cliche, but the translation is garbage. For Example, 11 somehow = 100. Makes sense! The development is garbage, and extreamly cliche with a disgusting perverted mc. The character design is also extreamly cliche, and perverted. The MCs sole goal is to make a 3000 strong harem, which is DISGUSTING. There is almost no background to the world, and it makes no sense. Also his system is weird af.
The general world building is pretty good, with a nice story to it. I would really like more of this. BUT there are a lot of errors, especially he/she her/his... and there are some weird story developments...like when Lydia, the mother of the Myra just comes outta nowhere and jumps him
The story is quite interesting. This is an x-rated story. The description of the incident is very detail and words used are harsh and not suitable for some who cannot handle it. The story line portrays what is happening somewhere in the real world that other cannot see. It's dirty but it's reality. Some people are unfortunate to be in that life.
Hey authour here yes im shamelessly reviewing myself with 5stars here. But i want yall to know that this is my first novel so the grammar may mot be perfect but i promise you will like the story line so hive it a try please and thank you ;-;
Just realized I never gave a revie so here we go. This is by far my personal favorite novel on the app that I have read so far. The characters are enjoyable, the story is engaging and overall just fantastic writing. I highly recomend this novel for anyone that likes dragons and any other fantasy genre.
The writing quality is very good there’s nothing bad I can say about it the problem is that the story develops to slowly if there even is one the main character is going back and visiting all his old companions but because they’re in the story for so short it’s hard to get to know them or even there story it is a good read if you have a lot of time but if you want action or something with more substance you can skip this one I’m on 50 And I will drop this book but all in all it is a good read
I'd give it a 3/5 if it wasn't for the poor character design of the MC, and the development of the story itself lacking.I found myself skipping through paragraphs each chapter simply because they weren't entertaining and couldn't keep me focused on them. The story itself, from the 30 chapters I read, focused more on everything else than it did the MC and his own character development, which, in my opinion, destroys the entire purpose of the first bit of chapters which are typically used to introduce most characters, and show character development to the MC.The chapters themselves felt like they kept getting shorter and shorter, with like almost nothing interesting happening at all during the first 30 chapters.Overall, just a bad story, poorly thought out imo.
If you like house of horror and the Lord of Mystery there is no need to further read this review quickly go and read this novel you won't regret it. So far I've read the first 39 so this is my review of it, READ AND VOTE don't let this Hidden Gem go to waste.
Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. Not only that, the story is consistent and makes sense, the foreshadowing is used correctly, the characters have shown steady, fluid development, and the world is created well. 5/5 stars deserved. This could be published as a paperback eventually as a bestseller if wanted.
OMG NEW BOOK!!!
wonderful Chapter ...
runaway alpha the story is good and interesting