This is such an interesting story, honestly! Unique than the usual stories I have reviewed in WN. Just work on the dialogues a lil bit more instead of just summarizing what happen in the description. This book has so much potential. Thanks author!
Does the writing quality get any better? I'm currently on chapter 18, and at the beginning there were alot of mistakes. Now I still see the same mistakes being repeated.
Don't get me wrong the story is very intriguing! It keeps me at the edge of my seat wanting more!!
It's just the spelling, and punctuation that make me a bit confused at times.
For example the Author uses her instead of him at times, and it makes it very hard to tell the persons gender especially when you first introduce them.
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Thus is one if the best and most original novels on here! This isn't just some power fantasy that most novels on here quickly become and as of yet has no romance other than mentions of his past life and is likely to stay that way.
Beware those who are opposed to witnessing humans at their worst and willing to do anything to survive for the Main characters second incarnation as a human shows him and most others of our race at such a point. However while the MC may seem cruel it is only him doing absolutely everything in the name of survival and finding a way to survive...
Or die for the last, final, time!
Whoever translated this one did a terrible job half the time can’t even figure out who it is talking about because the translator kept swapping the sixes there’s like a whole paragraph about the main character talking about how she did this she did that it gets frustrating. Are usually enjoy stories about pets and that stuff but this one is just painful I never thought I’d feel actual pain when we did a story on Webnovel i’m severely Disappointed
My first ever review for my favorite novel so far on Webnovel. I’m not good with the review thing but this story has surpassed all my expectations and raised the bar so high it’s difficult to like any other story now. Whether it’s the world background, character’s design or the story development, everything is superb and I’m amazed at how the ML isn’t OP. I just lose interest most of the times when the ML is so OP that there’s no logic to it. The character development of ML is well written and I love his progress so far. His growth and falls are logical and impressive which made me cry and cheer for him. The risks taken in the story and characters development is applaud worthy.
The writing is so meticulous which shows that the author has put lot of efforts and heart into this story. Currently at chapter 340 and I’, hooked to the story and can’t get enough of it. I keep refreshing the app when I’m free to check if there’s surprise update by mistake, even though the author is blessing us with 3 chaps daily! Thank you for the hard work dear author.
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Author is really a vast treasure of creativity. I was about to head to the next chapter when it was already finished. Author, waiting for more, PLEASE! Don't stop!
Looks promising. I cannot wait to start reading it. I just hope that it does not get to be one of them, premium stories, though. It sure breaks my heart to be unable to afford to read the latest chapter of a story that you really like.
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