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The early parts of this novel are pretty info-dumpy and stale, but it picks up pretty fast. His ability to create buildings, soldiers, etc in his own mini dimension is a unique and interesting concept. I've never read a WoW novel in my life, but I've still found this book to be a solid read. If you have the time, I suggest reading this book, and contributing some coins to help this novel get picked :)
Great story ruined by webnovel’s greed. They couldn’t even bother to get a proofreader past like chapter 250, this is legit just MTL and they are charging for it. Absolutely shameless.
Up to: Chapter 470This is, by far, one of the best-written novels on this site, and it’s hard for me to find things I dislike about it, excluding two decisions Eldrian made that I found highly disagreeable, but I won’t go over that since I don’t want to dissuade you from trying this amazing novel for yourself and it’s not a huge deal at the end of the day. The MC is overall very competently written, and has a distinct personality not found in many of the bland OP protagonists that litter the site. Sometimes he messes up, but I prefer it that way as it shows he isn’t a mindless perfection robot. This is doubly so since the author made sure to give him some real, actual flaws that hinder him in ways he doesn’t realize and that the author doesn’t specially highlight. Even if it isn’t especially common that it happens explicity, his flaws are pervasive in all the ways he acts and he acts in character very consistently, though he does change over time. The only other novels on this site I’ve read that share similarly well-written MCs would be Supreme Magus and The Oracle Paths, and it’s a huge breath of fresh air. Other than the MC, the world and magic system in particular is super well thought-out, and most of the time unanswered questions are not left as loose ends. The novel is a bit of a slow burn, but it’s superbly executed; that extra time between improvement isn’t filler, but instead juicy bits of lore, IRL stuff, third-person tidbits, training, and tasks, with only a couple of minor timeskips. We’re almost at 500 chapters, and not even half a year has passed because we’re pretty much following everything Eldrian does in its entirety (again, minus a few time skips). This is a huge plus for me, as I really hate a majority of mid-story time skips even if they’re really well done and a one-time thing like in One Piece. Either way, I strongly recommend that you at least try to trad this hidden gem, I highly doubt you’ll regret it.
First, I have read the novel...up to chapter 229 actually, I only created this account to write this review because I cannot remember my other one's password and do not have access to it at this time. First, I will say that you had a great story going for the first 200 chapters or so. Then, you decided that the mc needed a "bump" in the road. I'm all for that, but not when the "bump" destroys literally all 200 chapters before it. LIterally, undead legion...gone...endgame villain...gone...gods we have never heard of or been hinted at...here? I feel that was a poorly planned bump and I feel no motivation to read after he lost the king, the abyssal knights, his original goal, his boyz, everything. At first I thought he would get it back, but then in chapter 213-215 suddenly Zoe isn't even the main love interest anymore. Vanessa, who was only mentioned like twice, is suddenly who he seems to like because he is too stupid to realize Zoe likes him. Nobody is that dumb...come on. Then Mercy even becomes one too? Really? The interesting love interest built up masterfully for 200 chapters no longer seem so to matter. His work is all gone....I'm sorry but even if he gets everything back it will feel fake. A bump is good, but if it destroys everything before it then it was not well done. Sorry but I'm gonna have to quit reading, please enjoy your passion and continue your work.
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Way to many similiar names, especially ones that start with Z makes it confusing and hard to read without losing track of who's who. One chapter I just read had 5 different characters with Z Names that where practically the same, super annoying to read.
Very bad writing and too much filler it sucks ........................................................................................................
This is by far the best cultivation novel you can find. I can safely say that i have read almost all cultivation novels worth speaking about and this is miles ahead of them all. Save me some cake!
I genuinely enjoyed this one in the beginning. I even ignored the first crumbs of nationalism to continue reading, but the further you read the worse it gets.Sad really.
One should write a review as detailed as he could to tell every reader about the novel, but I won't.Because there is no need to it.I will just say "l LOVE IT"
I am so excited for this I love all of MLB's works and this looks like it will be no different and i can not wait till it really starts to heat up and get good i am excpecting this one to be no different.