Its an amazing description. But how the mc's mind actually work is confusing. Idk if its from the translation or its just the way it is but it gives disappointment. I hope as the story builds up, it improves.
In the year 2050, a massive spaceship appears above Earth, causing panic among the governments of the world. A humanoid alien emerges from the ship and introduces himself as the ancestor of humanity, claiming that his species distributed their life code to various universes and galaxies in an effort to recover their numbers after a war. The alien goes on to reveal that nuclear energy will be removed from Earth and replaced with a new form of energy called mana, which has multiple uses. He also announces the installation of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity and help them become stronger.While the concept of an ancestor alien visiting Earth and introducing a new form of energy is certainly interesting, the execution of this idea could be improved upon. For example, it is not entirely clear how the alien's announcement of the removal of nuclear energy is received by the various governments of the world. Additionally, the explanation for the existence of humanity and their connection to the ancestor alien species could be fleshed out more. While it is mentioned that the lack of mana on Earth has made humanity weak, it would be helpful to have a more detailed explanation of how this has occurred and how the introduction of mana will change things.Additionally, the concept of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is intriguing, but it is not entirely clear how this system will work or what its purpose is. More information on the specific trials and challenges that humanity will face, as well as the rewards that can be earned by completing them, would be helpful in fully understanding this aspect of the story.The character of the ancestor alien is also somewhat lacking in depth. While his physical appearance and the fact that he can communicate telepathically with humanity are certainly interesting, there is not much else known about him. A more detailed background and personality for this character would add depth to the story and make him a more fully realized character.Overall, while the world building in this story has potential, it could be improved upon with more detailed explanations and fleshed out characters. However, the concept of an ancestor alien introducing a new form of energy and a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is certainly an interesting one and has the potential to be developed into a compelling story.
I can't wait to read this it sounds like a great book I love video games but I wish it was a comic book be case the pictures would bring it to life and would help me imagine it better and I love the name and is full of adventure and life I hope people looking forward to it as well as me but I like comic books I hope I like it
This is a quality work. sufficient world building and character development. Impressive story telling. Very few minor grammatical errors. More importantly, it met my extremely high standard of MC OPness. Going to check out the author's other work.
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This is a review based on the free chapters.I wasn't initially expecting much going in, and reading the first chapter, I was actually pretty disappointed since I am usually not a fan of perverted scum main characters.But I'm actually surprised, this is pretty good! It's really funny, and the main character acts like a lunatic, which I think makes it better than usual and redeems him slightly in my eyes.I hope it gets picked, but looking at it I think another novel from this batch already got selected, which is disappointing since it's none of the two novels that I was wanting. Once again qidian has disappointed me in the selection of trial novels! I should probably stop reading these since apparently none of the novels I like ever get selected.
such a good book, with WN picking up bunches of older novels I hope this gets picked up too
It's a pretty good novel with an interesting plot. I would really recommend reading this novel and by the way does anyone know the raw of this novel???
i am shocked because this is surprisingly good............................................................................................................
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No girlfriend all his life and now he can turn into a girl...