Ali_Jutt_8307
I am new here so I would like to say as my first few stories I like it very much.
Loved how the author brought so many twists and turns only in the arc.
The second arc is about to finish and I can't wait for the next arc.
Please update this. The beginning is good. There is a lot of potential. Just keep going and don't give up. Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
This is an all rounder book that covers all aspects of one's life and is pretty interesting with plot.
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Concept of story is very good.
But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business.
For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.
Aaaaaah, this book is so good! Please let it picked up and translated. Pretty please with sugar on top!! It is rare to get a book with monster as MC!!
Really enjoyed the 60 chapters released..
It has a balance of talent, cultivation levels, skills and his cheats..
His cheat is very unique and reminds me of 'Chu Li's Omniscient Mirror from 'White-Robed Chief' it's kinda OP if used correctly.. really can't wait for more chapters
Overall, what I could read if the story reminded me of Kings Avatar or Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God, but without so many cringy cliche moments. You aren't told why or how the MC is reincarnated into the past. Though the author should be very careful about copyright moving forward as I did notice that the location names and some of the history was basically World of Warcraft.
the MC is just a lucky who gets gets super lucky 9 out of 10 times. the plot has 0% creativity and is just a combination of a bunch of usual cliche's . i can confidently say that this is one of the worst novels i ever read.
Okay let me just get this out first, I am a sucker for post apocalyptic, zombies, and rebirth novels, and especially if they have a comedy tag.
Speak no more, I am a simple man and you had me at apocalypse.... also thanks for letting me know about this story.
With that out of the way, let's get to the story, instead of generic 1 time rebirth, this one decides to give us 100!!
100x Rebirth = 100x Expectations
I expect to see epic clairvoyance-like moments, and you too, whoever is reading this comment, I bet the MC also expected you reading this.
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