Ali_Jutt_8307
I have a question. Why would a rational guy want to sleep with women who are going to sleep with just any guy even your enemies? Your MC is a f**kboy. Not some chad. Just warning readers who might read this novel without not knowing the consequences.
So the MC is a lazy character who does not want to do anything, mainly because his system requires it. First he transmigrates to this powerful family and works hard until he is tested to have trash talent. At that point he thinks about his family and realizes that there really is no point in him working hard as his family is one of the most powerful in the world. This unlocks his system. It offers him rewards as long as he keeps being lazy. This being the case and with a very supportive family who does not cast him out for poor talent, he does just what the system requires for his most optimal cultivation.
Later his family gets into trouble and is attacked by 2+1 of the other top level families in the world. At this point he has been lazy for 10 years which change the character of anyone. At first he does not realize there is a problem as he does not keep track of things. When combat breaks out he realizes that his family is under attack. At this point he monitors the situation hoping that he does not need to take action as that would expose his top of the world cultivation. This is fairly natural as he has been lazy for 10 years. But with the love and care he has received from his family he first tries to act as a leader to protect the family without exposing himself. Then he makes a move under the guise of a talisman given to him by his father. Finally when the 3rd family decides to join in to attack his family and those who are the backbone of the family are in danger he finally takes action to save them which also exposes his cultivation.
This is a very fast paced story especially to start with. It starts with him discovering his talent then the system unlocking and then a 10 year time-skip. The story was actually better than most of the reviews suggested, mainly because the MC follows a natural progression based on habit.
Hi, it's author here, and I would love to know what you think about the book.
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Brother your dialogues need massive work. Most of the time the conversation doesn't has any emotions. Also you need a editor asap. This thing is barely readable
Amazing. I've seen a review for this on yt and fell in love with this story
Like why the change after the dwarf kingdom, it's like the whole backstop doesn't matter anymore.
I love the storyline, I love the characters and I love how he respects his parents and he is an honest young man. I highly recommend that people should read this story. keep up the good work.
From wath I read this has a kinda scadderd story, but it seems to be getting a little better chapter by chapter. The main character is the only character we really know, because we haven't gotten a lot of information about the other characters or wath they are thinking. On the other hand this is a story from Tha mc's point of view so why would she know what the others are thinking. It would de good to get an actual date for updates but I think getting one or two updates a week is fine even if a date isn't set. The writer makes a few writing mistakes here and there, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'd like to know more about how smart the mc is. She has knowledge, but how much of it?
I love this novel. I have read it over 20 times already and I love it more each time.
The best bad book I have ever read! It was amazingly surprisingly shockingly... nice, in a mediocre way! Also, the best book for ass-licking too? (Da **** is that tag so clickbait lol...)
Nice start. The book has potential. There are some errors here and there but it is readable. Need a little bit of rereading and this will become a masterpiece. Has high potential. Explain a little more power level and methods to obtain it. That's all. waiting for more chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This novel was reccomended to me by a friend of mine Murhpy and I must say I have no regrets. The story is great so far though I haven't gotten to the full on yandere quite yet I expect great things. Keep up the great work author.
