Its an interesting premise and I like the characters different emotional perspectives. Though there are a fee grammatical errors, it doesn't confuse the reader. I wish you the best on your book Author
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the translation is meh.. and the progress pf the story is sluggish.its remind me of the grabekeeper from the gisa pyramide but as a really cheap rip-off
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I loved it very good, incredible, the story and plot are very good and the plot twist very interesting, I really liked the character of the protagonist and the heroines, the harem very good, I recommend it More will not be regret
Superb cultured writing, and the plot supporting it with the mc being a former failed experimentation who had enough of the world is good. Keep going author ?
between chapters 1-100 is the best section of the story
between 101-200 is sort of okay but the system almost doesn't exist(not exactly the strongest system)
between 201-300 the MC makes decisions that make reading further impossible. At least for me, and it really let me take a step back and analyze details I had been ignoring. Which really killed everything that was interesting about this story all at once.
Cover page is attractive. Concept or theme is really unique. Writing quality is nice as well. Plot seems hooking.
So ,5 stars.
I would recommend author to add a few figure of speechs and it'll add more colours in the piece.
Super work author.
Alright first off, that title is horribly translated. Second off, wasn’t the pregnancy stare in Strongest System? Correct me if I’m wrong. Third off, I know for a fact that the prenancy stare was in Keyboard. Feel like this is gonna be low quality fan fic
I read all 40 chapters in one sitting and wish there was more. Disappointed that it is on hiatus, but hop for more in the future. There is something oddly satisfying about someone constantly humiliated and bullied getting such immediate and powerful revenge, even if it is predictable at times. I really hope that the author adds more soon.
Just a “son-in-law” book. you know if you know