pretty good over all just would like background info how he got the system and where he started/ came from. I need 140 charactersI need 140 characters
Awesome story.Some real talent. The characters,the tension,the emotional rollercoaster etc.its all amazingly designed. Cant wait for more to come out
One of the classic novel of Louis Cha ( Jin Yong ) that created like the Legend of the Condor Heroes, Return of The Condor Heroes Trilogies.
I Love this story it's absolutely hilarious, it starts off a little slow so I encourage you to power through the first dozen or so chapters until the story picks up momentum but once it does its a gentleman's novel that knows how to keep you amused. I recommend this novel to all who understand that all men have perverted thoughts its just about whether they are honest about them or not.
A nice read, It's really smooth and has a intriguing story This work is currently in a competition so please support the author by voting for it.
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This book do have story about jesus there are many stories behind it even when we can't see jesus but he is always there for us jesus is the most important person in everything
It's a really neat and cute story, I I like how you arrange your sentences. It is easy to read in my opinion.I feels that you can try to write more, I'm sure you will be a good writer.
I really hope they revive this novel and it get chosen for real this is a great novel and they did in no justice leaving it hanging like this
The story unfortunately did not grab my attention. It has a stereotypical plot, but hey, sometimes that is what a reader needs. Its not for me, but give it a try.
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