man i know it's slice of life but you exaggerated every moment it becomes boring and sometimes annoying so lessen it a little bit and keep it a little fast paced
Overall great book with smooth introduction into the story.
Character development goes with decent pacing, making them well rounded (terms of traits & personality).
World building which is also significant, describes the details good enough for the reader to depict the image of surroundings much easier.
Post more. Everything is good. The MC is betrayed, neglected, and scapegoated. He is OP, like more OP than Anos. He goes from innocent to savage. He is like Gohan.
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Short Title:PROSIAlternate Title:孤岛求生之重生狂蟒Status [Edit]:""""""Completed596""""Author:Gaze Through the Winter WaterCountry:ChinaType:Web NovelGenre:
Action, Adventure, Fan-Fiction, Fantasy, Urban Life
Tags [Edit]:Crossover, Genetic Modifications, Non-humanoid Protagonist, Reincarnated as a Monster, System Administrator
Framed by others, Ye Bei was seriously injured and killed.
When I woke up, I realized that I had become a python on an isolated island!
In order to live and revenge, Ye Bei started from a small python step by step.
Through the Amazon forest, into the death triangle…
Sky-swallowing python, golden dragon, ancient dragon!
And this is just the beginning-
Devouring evolution, constantly devouring evolution!
Captain America, Hulk, Alien, Predator, Ultraman, Godzilla, Superman…
ppl just spamming 5* just for intriguing Sypnosis lol[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
come back to this story man! we miss it!
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hope the book is selected.
Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars!
Here's what you can expect:
The Good
The story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal.
Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent.
Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel hehe
The Bad
Pacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work on
No romance...
POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better.
There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this too
All in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
Aight listen up, so the premise of this at first is what will be in your mind is "this finna be like tokyo ghoul or something" well it is similar to some aspects but it also isn't, lets just say that the author loved TG so much that He even wrote a novel with the same concept as it is but dont worry, he didnt exactly copy it, I salute to that
The dialogue Lines are short and easy to read, definitely my cup of tea
the prologue got me hangin cuz it was too short and things were happening too fast and it got me thinking for many questions, author could have put how the accident was executed but he didn't, that is what drove me to read the next chapter until the next one and next one, which you will eventually enjoy
and then I think it's the right thing about it that we can get the money out of nowhere and the game is the only way to make out the difference and I woke
rooting for this to get picked, tho i ahvent read the other trials yet so can recommend please? word count word count word count wrod count word count