DreamOfAPoet
Got to give this 5 stars.
The author is so much good at explaining football matches. It like you can see the game happening while you read.
The story is about Kazuki got a system that allowed him to train! In sleep!
The pace and progression of the story are absolutely great!
The translation is passable but the author has never mad an effort to fix the mistakes. The biggest issue is the story development, all the MC does is talk about what he wants to do but 90% of it never gets done or cant be done yet. So why keep talking about it every chapter.
I'm very disappointed in the MC. For a old man that lived for more than 500yrs, he's not the brightest. I guess it has more to do with his interactions with the women he meets. He never knows how to handle them. I think he lied about his 500 years experience.....
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Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember. Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try
"have the most intimate contact with the beasts"
ok........................................................................................
The writing quality is the best out there. I see no problem with the grammar, but people might say I have low taste in grammar. That might be true, but as long as I can read the text, it's enough for me.
While cultivating he's unable to control his body and the system can just do whatever, which apparently includes raping some random poor girl. I'll lose faith in the readers on this app if this gets chosen.
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Muy buena novela la trama es muy interesante y detallada espero lacontinuacion de la historia, muchas gracias y feliz navidad gracias author ytraductores x su trabajo
This is good so good, but so little...ahem R-18 chapter............................................
well done?...............................................
