Rapidmoviment
I've read to about 200 so far and I'm still wondering if they have found what genetic (genes) he's from...
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge.
All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
Cannot give 5 star.
Because i know author have a bad habit in delaying the chapter release.
Not just this one but many author.
Just keep it up an do your best.
Dont drop it like the top star.
My mood for reading a novel dropped so much.
Because some of novel really2 bad to read. And some good novel dropped. Some of it become bad.
Author just do your best
Sorry dropped , read 50 chapters , the content does not justify the title , the author should change the title , it's misleading also I cannot see any character development in the novel
check ur book, there are some missing parts. mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Not bad....
My only comment, if you're into ambiguous commentary that kinda of border on hentai? Then this is the novel for you. Everytime something like that came up it just took me out of the story, it was so distracting. Meanwhile my search for a FANTASY ONLY pet novel continues. Unfortunately a lot of them have weirdo perv MC's, Harems, Romance or Slice of Life. Seriously Monster Integration can't be the only one out there can it?
This novel is very very good... aside from the first 5 chapters. it states that the mc did some messed up things, like cucking his brother, but were never given any description of it and its only briefly mentioned in one sentence. If you can get through the first 5 chapters, this book is definitely worth the read.
The story is fresh and has an interesting plot, as the author I tried to put in dept in my characters, and the story line is one that is not common. I hope you guys checks it out and also live a review.
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its good just try it and give some time..
for genre please be an developing plot with clam and comedic mc with some what harem relationship with proper feelings and all...
i k ow its too much to ask but hey you asked for our choices...
The overall story was alright. Just alright. Nothing really notable. The path of revenge, but it makes you feel rather, made me feel not satisfying at all. Even with 1000 years of life experience going through blood shed, betrayal, and feeling the intent of death during the MC years, you really can tell he does not act like his true age at all, so rather than a thousand years the age would make more sense of his true age being about 30, maybe even less. Rather weird to be honest as I read, granted I stopped at chapter 80 I believe as I just left it at that, getting some of his revenge was not satisfying towards the reader. Don't get me wrong I am not attacking the author, he writes well, grammer is good, but the ultimate premise of the story as a whole just feels like an empty shell that does not give you any reward on to reading any further. When getting the so called "slaves" for his revenge, the writing makes you feel bland, if you came for r-18 there is hardly any in the beginning as the author just skips the scenes but puts other character scenes in? Weird right? Anyway later at the end it starts to be picked up in the category for the MC, if your coming for revenge its Fine. I recommend reading a couple chapters first to get your views on this book. These are my thoughts and opinions on this book, not the worst I read but will easily be blotted out in time...
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