Can't read this in hunger game. Nees to wait fkr night to come
sigh
Oh well
A good read overall.
The premise is nice, and I especially liked the begining. The grammar is definitely better than a lot of novels I've read here, and it shows potential.
I like the suspense that the story builds up from the start too.
All in all, I'm rooting for Luke.
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The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!
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It was interesting and it was also my first time seeing this kind of webnovel. I mean, I did read first POV webnovels before, but not webnovels stating whose POV is being done like this one.
The chapters are also short. So, the story feels like it's moving fast, even though the pace is actually slow.
Sadly, the chapters are still short.
The world in this story becomes more and more deep and interesting as it goes on. It draws you in from the beginning but keeps you reading. There are some slow chapters but it pays off hugely as the story develops. It's exciting and well-built. Also the characters aren't just pawns, they all seem to have their own motivations and are complex in their own right which makes their interactions all the more enticing. The clear critique is that there are slow chapters, but if all the chapters tried to be exciting without giving room for development, it may become less impactful when things pay off. So I'm fine with those chapters.
So far at the time of this review there are 18 chapters. The story so far has a fairly consistant MC personality wise, and takes the word demonic to a whole new level xanxia wise. We’re not talking “Guy who won’t bother people” standard, we’re talking “Will slaughter anyone who comes in his path” demonic. The only other character as evil as our MC here is Tarun from Sovereign Of Blood from my knowledge. Though, this is only hinted at until about 15 chapters in.
As the other dude pointed out it’s a really nice touch him discovering his power, as that aspect MCs usually just ignore it or magically know it.
Can’t talk about much else considering the story is so young, but it’s good so far.
mr.author... i like this book very very much so please try to update everyday 2 chapter like you do months ago. Thanks for your hard work . ......god bless you.......
love the story, hopefully you don't drop it
I don't usually read ML novels, but this is definitely one of the best. I like how the characters were created and the world background is very excellent. Overall, it's 10/10.