the synopsis alone disgusts me There's no doubt that is this is a thirdclass popcorn novel do do do foo go go go go go go go for it j JC LLC of
Good concept
Bad story
Author is just a retard
what a waste of time.
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Just read the first few chapters, you'll understand why I gave such a low score. The translation seems good, but the actual novel is just. . . bad. It only goes into small amounts of detail, and makes the peoples reactions incredibly unbelievable. The characters actions bring you away from being immersed into the story every sentence, or two if you're lucky. I've seen better written fan-fictions on wattpad, and I'm not saying those were even close to decent.
don't overcomplicate sentences, make it simple if you can. i want to read novel, not study journal. it's uncomfortable to read. i just skim through the chapter. 10 chaps is all i can do. the first few chapters are good, it gone downhill after mc transmigration(?) to the past, i don't know why, i just lost the will to read the rest, it's just felt uncomfortable to read.
it has good potential. my advice is, let your friend read it first before posting it in WN
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I just giving five star for MC laziness . . It's looks interesting but it's pick or not, that's the big problem.... Anyways, just make it bit comedy!! I love mostly because life very dull ..
Estou aguardando ao que parece tem potencial essa novel
dropped again
how sad
Author, this novel is over? or did you give it a rushed ending? I say this because it has few chapters :c
I await your reply soon, to know if it is worth reading or not xd
Thanks for your time :v
Like New Age of Summoners not much is wrong with the book... The book upadate and the story progress is very constant... Just that the book is nothing spectacular it hovers around the above average category... One of those books to read when there is nothing to read and you have sometime to kill...
This is a good read for a while. The writing quality, I think it's fine. Story Development and Characters are also good and great. I will surely look forward to more.