Reviewing myself because why not. I personally feel that my first chapter is better than most I have read on here. The first 40ish chapters will feel like they were too fast but I did that to give the readers a kind of outline of how the future of the book is. Granted the future arcs are going to feel way too long lol. I plan on this book being a few thousand chapters and each month y'all keep this book in the top 10 I will release an extra 30 chapters. (but that is way into the future lol)
The story is worth a five star, you can see the efforts that was placed in creating the world background, the characters are loveable and the plot is great. Your story has a lot of potential and i wish you good luck author.
The story is so good and promising-looking for more to come and the plot is really interesting and I can't wait for the new chapter thank you
Good start, interesting plot. but you should put a little though about your pacing and period placement. I hope you can keep up the story as well sharpening your skill. Story must be told.
This is one of the best webnovel, I've ever read. Sad that this was dropped from translating. Please webnovel its almost 2 years already. Please continue translating this ?
One of my four recommended read. Hopefully this passes through the trial read and go to the voting pool. Very irritating intro, since the start is about parents abandoning their children, so if you can get through that then everything is wonderful. MC will have a system that would also have a system space included where MC can train his cooking skills with time dilation included. Really hope that people can pass the intro to read this novel, since it's very interesting to read. This is definitely one of the top three in my four recommended read.
The kind of MC who always got bullied whenever he went, even his parents as well, barely had any friend in school, and always thought himself as a useless being for being born with such a lowly power... compared to others who shot flame, blizzard, thunder and poison from their hands... his Charm wouldn't do much but to max the charisma point in the S.P.E.C.I.A.L points.Or is that so? Anyway, did you noticed that I use mostly past tense for the paragraph above? Well, I wouldn't like to spoil you more, because the satisfaction when the MC finally able to [REDACTED] those bullies... well, you wouldn't be that satisfied knowing [REDACTED]. Definitely worth to read and watch the MC do tons of [REDACTED] with his true power.Then, about the writing... it's clear and vivid, less ambiguous, telling the surrounding and what the character think and do, especially with the first person perspective, making it more easy to follow and understand of what happened.Then there's the dialogue. The dialogue is clearly the strongest point of this stort. Every dialogue sound different to each character---that sense from the annoying brads, the archetype of scaredy-cat persons, etc---giving them rich timbre (or tone color in musical term for rich-sounding music or dialogues in this case).The plot, I have nothing to say anymore as you must read it for yourself to get that sense of "take that, b****!"-ish.About pacing, well I think it's a bit rushing (at least in my standard) in the beginning of chapter when the MC had yet to found his true nature. Hoping to see his past being told as a miserable human, just to see him "return the favour" later on. Well no matter, the story development itself already alright, and I truly enjoy reading it.About grammar, no comment on that, since I'm not native speaker, and you seemed did a better job than me.With that being said, I guess that's all...Lastly but not least, I'd like to thank to the Author who keeps updating and writing this good story for us.Thank you... ^^Keep on writing~
Get well soon Midgard, cause I'm going through withdrawals without new chapters of my favorite story
i looooove this omg, everything is so attention grabbing, the background development is amazing as for the characters
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please tell me raw
This is just pure fire, I can only feel utter amazement at the length and quality of each and every chapter. CAN NOT wait for more, waiting patiently...