Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here.
For the story:
If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels.
Warnings:
There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story.
At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip.
This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story.
Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it!
(For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)
Kid who was kidnapped at 3 years old, held in terrorist organization hideout and trained brutally for 6 years. Being beaten, forced to train, being brainwashed to be a mindless killer, being thrown into a room with all other kids and told 'last one to survive is free to go' and ends up being the last man standing. After all of this, SWAT raids the hideout and he gets rescued, not only does he have NO trauma, he acts like a grownup while talking with others, he trusts some random man to adopt him, agrees, goes home with the man and after 2 weeks of being there he GETS A FRIEND who is his age. How would a kid with past like that be able to trust anyone, not to mention make a friend? And to top it off, the 'friend' who is martal arts genius, who trained a lot, but only sparred, never had to fight for his life, somehow manages to fight the MC to a tie in a duel? The character design is very, very bad. His background is a massive plothole. No idea why the author would introduce a background like that, only to make the MC 'normal'.
I have read a few chapters and what can I say. This story it probably one of the best out of here, even though I read only one.
This story gave me some Grand Theft Auto, Mafia, Saints Row and God-Father vibes. Can't wait for your next work, Author!
Thank me mortal cause i'll give you the best review with full star
Great novel! I normally don't like sci-fi stuff but this was written really well. I love the story development and the description. Would definitely recommend to others.
I see around here that is tradition the "shameless five stars review from the authors", so here I am with mine, this story is about a child that somehow incorporate the human's nature for destruction and war, and make this his power. Give it a shot, I think it is worth your time :)
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I loved this book, ive read it ten times on wattpadd and its still good as the first time i read it. keep up the good work for spreading this story. it deserves to be known to the webnovel world.
this book requires you to read it carefully as the word might trigger stumbling of different ideas that the author is having. overall good book to read. i recommend this to those guys out there who likes to feel strong
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So a good novel (would've been more awesome ) but came to a sh it type cz of the braindeadness of the characters...mc came from a modern world cz of some obsession...he succeeded too...then start as a generic cultivation novel setup... though a bit of twist (only a little ) ...then both the mc and his sister take most of the shi t choices they can...they can't cultivate but later can and get the op talent of all ...yet they give up all the benefits of the powerful god level family to go t a lower world without any protection or anything just to have a f king struggle powerup...which they could easily get from the family...and they don't have any shi t knowledge of any details of anything in particular as well...and the f king mc didn't even have his caution for this as well...I mean this maybe a good novel base but the most f king sh it character setup for mc and sh it decision making...well read at your own risk...
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