None can stand in opposition of my lethal explosion magic.
Could I possibly resist the urge to unleash explosion magic when faced with such a massive army?
No, I can't!
Oh, blackness shrouded in light...
Frenzied blaze clad in night...
In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest.
Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise!
EXPLOSION!
This might be the best of this batch and I hope it gets picked .....................................
I would say its a good story if your board and just wan't to read something, Its just that its your typical system type story. Ignore this part just writing to get the 140 characters
Aw man, 2 chapters/week is too . . .
You know what i mean
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Awesome story.Some real talent. The characters,the tension,the emotional rollercoaster etc.its all amazingly designed. Cant wait for more to come out
really liking it so faralthough this is a rather "casual" novel with somewhat fast pacing i actually dont really mind italso not really many romance moments which is a bit of a shame
Nyghtwryter here, just wanted to thank you all for checking out the first draft of TLPOR. I gave my self a lower rating since I know my writing could use some improving and I’m brutally honest with myself.Anyways, I thought at first I could rewrite a lot of content in 2 months, but it’s taking me a lot longer than I thought, to finish rewriting just one chapter, so it may be around 3-4 months, realistically to come back with enough to drop everyday. I will at the same time, begin writing the sequel, Atlas’s Origins, during my free time. Not sure where I’ll post it, but I’ll make sure, to let y’all know!TLDR: Rewrite coming in 3-4 months Atlas’s Origins (Sequel) coming soon
Great story so far but the whole hiding the identity thing is getting lamer! how can he not imagine how his woman will feel once she knew the truth? given that he tried to tell her the truth but without any efforts makes it meh.. still great free read
I love it good story line and Mc already turn into the type of character I like to read about. Courage wise and self teach badass...this is worth reading...
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I am surprised with your talent and writing skill I don't usually read these types of books but by taking a chance I must commend the author for writing this book and also I rate all 5 star........ To the best I could tell by the chapters that you are one out of a million best author in the world I must say you deserve all the best in the future and that wish are coming from myself Vanessa dowlatram keep it up
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................