Cwunchy_tacotg
I like the plot of the story and everything else but the release is really slow but except for that I like it because it’s cultivation and a game but at the same time it is in real life in his world
Yeah I said I was gunna wait until 100+ chapters, but the mc's mentality is like a 10 year olds, you would think that after he has killed more than probably 100000+ monsters, he would be more idk, mature but he just keeps acting like a 13 year old. I can get some of the reactions like meeting his family after years, but I think other things are a tab bit exaggerated. Other than that the world Background was probably the best aspect. But I like that the author is replying to the comments, and is active so i'll give it a 4 star to support the novel.
This book is actually really good. The book has an unique background that has some similarities with other books but the 'virus' part makes it stand out.
Though, you update too slow
Woah. The synopsis had me intrigued. The games is giving me the chills. can't wait for the next. Keep up the good work author [img=update][img=update]
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Poetic, beautiful and moving. This book has everything going for it and more. I love it and I'm sure any fan of fantasy will as well. The vocabulary is vast and the writing quality is consistent.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Upvote. Keep at it! Very interesting story can't wait to see where it goes. Alot of good things to say. Some things could be improved on but it just gets better and better. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=exp]
Excellent approach to the story telling. Excellent translation. Good plot. But the chapters are too short. All in all, Excellent. Eagerly expecting the updates.
translation are so bad so many he to she, and translator doesnt seem to get this is why webnovel suck. this kind of quality and they want us to pay. you can have
I must say your writing style deviated from the common practice (using Author's Note a bit too much, and the dialogues are done differently). It takes a tremendous amount of time for people to shift their preferences, so be warned. overall, the story is good.
Despite the grammar issues, the story is very intriguing, and it doesn't lack the 'thriller' effect.I very much enjoyed reading it, and hope the author will be kind enough to present us with more chapters! ??????
