I think sukuna's hero name should be the king of curses or sth better
and sukuna should be the anti hero type but u portray as a hero
I love the uniqueness of the plot. The story pace is also good. The characters development is good. The translation could be better but iits lso good as it is.
KiBiBiK's review series:
One sentence review: A pretty interesting cheat power that gets ruined through boring repetition of the plot as well as uninteresting and unrelatable characters (And also boring and fake dialogues).
Detailed review: An interesting cheat power that has tremendous potential in terms of treasure hunting. I had great hopes for the future but the story clearly showed its level of less than mediocrity from the beginning itself. I could think of tens of scenes and uses of this power straight out of my mind in a couple of seconds but the author decided to stick with 'storage' gambling. Just that. Repeat that. Repeat that. Repeat that.
Did n't you get annoyed? Exactly that's my problem here. 60+ chapters done and the author is cycling the same thing again and again. And let me tell you, this thing is new and but not the coolest. (I believe 130+ is still the same thing)
Is there a hook that makes you read the novel? NO
Is there an interesting character or MC that makes you continue reading? NO. (Some might like the characters- but I find them dull)
Another big problem is the unnecessary racial discrimination and slurs used. Just freaking unneeded. "Yellow" this. "Yellow" that. Seriously. You could do better.
Logic: Somewhat works somewhere. But I find big loopholes everywhere in terms of modern legal system as well as personality.
A foreign student who got enrolled in a 'Fake' university will be in the process of DEPORTATION. But the MC can do whatever he wants. Maybe, the author will touch that up later? who knows?
It is illegal to work or earn money for someone with a Student Visa. This guy is making money and then publicizing it.
Let's forget this assuming he is a US citizen or permanent resident. But he is clearly not American.
A stranger who he just met is willing to invest money trusting him without questions? And even gives 60-40 share? Seriously? What year is this?
Characters are too loud and dull. "Hey Buddy" hundred times.
The usage of God in this novel is HORRIBLE and annoying. You are Cheating for God's sake and still say God loves me.
Too lazy to write anything else..Yawn
I read this much leaving my brain locked up. Good luck.
You might like it.
Pros
A unique modern setting
An interesting cheat power
Cons
All the sentences above
I love the earth part of this story so very much ! the universe part is a bit slow but still interesting. author really try a very different genre with future universe travel unlike the other story which focus on reincarnation or changing dimensions
I have already written a review for this whole batch and ranked them by themselves, however this will just be a ranking for all novels in 1 review. This will be copied to all novels on this batch so don't worry.
1) Pet Simulator
2) Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation
3) Maximum Comprehension: Taking Care of Swords In A Sword Pavilion
4) My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly
5) Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives
6) Aiding My Queen With My System
This isn't an opinion this is a fact. Kekekekek
It’s pretty good
Hello there....
It's time for another REVIEW!!!!!!
1-Starts off slow and steady
2-Grammar very good
3-Amazing Characters
4-Character Development is extremely well done
5-Overall it's a well done novel
GOOD JOB AUTHOR
breath of fresh air, such a unique and amazing novel
Well, the sypnosis this time isnt that bad, it tells you what the goal and the begin is.
So basically a little lolita came before the mc telling him he is the descendant of a devil/demon lord of the underworld. The devil lord was betrayed and killed leaving only two inheritences left for the mc.
The little lolita (If you count it as one)
Weird device (Mechanics from a game mixed with the reincarnation law)
Because the little lolita is weak she really can't do anything combat related, but she was a genius that helped the devil lord with making the weird device.
Due mc's opinions they decided to make the weird device into a virtual reality game. (Basically SAO without the life risking sh*t)
Thus players join the game obvlious that they are in the underworld. They slay mobs for something called *soul coins* that could be used to buy weapons that were made with soul coins by the lolita.
5 soul coins production cost = 1 weapon
Shop: weapon = 10 soul coins.
With that the mc gathers a lot of soul coins to built a lot of things in the underworld. (They also use the players to explore sort of?)
Translation Quality: Nothing to complain about.
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Stability of Updates: Well...... Probably it's okay but for now.. GUYS VOTE FOR IT!
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Story development: It's interesting, the new things they keep adding kept it interesting. Such as a war, mansion and other things, plus the interaction of players is also fun to read.
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Character design: They are well made, let's hold it on that.
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World Background: Isn't much. Because the author focusses on the underworld and real world, while also the video game, the world background isn't really to see because how much the author wants to hide it.
But, I still give 5 stars because the author did a pretty good job on the other things. I mean, you need to focus on the game, real life world and underworld.
I'm not mad at that.
curious about the continuation of this novel?
You can read the MTL version first on :
novelraw.blogspot.com
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can someone tell me the mlt or raw of this novel ...............................................................................................
anyone know the raw for this??
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