pls end mylo's career that snake needs to know the only reason he can even score in the league was because mc feeds him goals not because of his own skill.
Eagerly waiting for TGH2 TGH3 and TGH4. Reading this book is not less than riding a rollercoaster. It gives me goosebumps everytime while reading. Lots of love?
Wow! Just so you know, I am not a very sci-fi person but this does make me want to keep reading and know what happened in the past for our male lead to become like that. I also see that you're heavily influenced by Japanese media.I did find it difficult to keep up sometimes when there was a sudden change in tenses or the genders while describing the events. Otherwise, it is really a great read, and I, most probably, will continue reading it. I personally really like characters like the raven head maiden. They are the best but my favorite part is male lead's interaction with his li'l sister XDAnd also, there is some element of comedy in-between and I really like it.
this a nice story, i was looking forward on reading it further,Thank you for the story.good day!.?????????????????????????
While the premise was fairly decent, the writing needs to be changed quite a bit. The character dialogues needs to be in separate sentences sometimes. What you did here just made everything feel cramped and cold to read. I'll take a paragraph from your novel as an example here;----------------------------------------------------------------------------Alright, open the gates. The commander wanted to meet him
except for the story being a bit slow everything's great
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Okay I'm going to be the first one to review this. The story is good but has to be better. And it only has 20 chapters if you can write more it would be better.
I'm lost in words like don't have anything to say but an update will do please. Want to know about Lily nd Hou bloodline. Are they related in some sense nd what will happened to Anqi
Is this a joke or something? This thing already got anime adaptation or is it donghua, whatever. Webnovel translating when there's clearly no need to
If you don’t like ntr then just leave and don’t say anything but is you do then this is top tier although there is no consistency in updates
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