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I really like this.... Can't wait to read more of this novel.... I should have had waited until there is more chapters..... I like it too much... I wonder who will be her love interest though.. Little four? I wonder if some of them(those she met during the testings) will turn gay... Though I think that the smart guy would find out that she's a she first.
One dimension story with anything goes. You read this for the stop gag comedy but cold jokes every line makes the story incoherent and it becomes a 5min lame reality comedy show every chapter.
The story is slow-paced and there are some mistakes here and there but overall, The plot is quite fascinating. The MC is not your average childish or righteous but is quite smart and adaptable to his situation. The side characters are also well-written. The mysteries surrounding the world make it more interesting. The battle scenes are average but could be improved. In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck
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170 chapters in and I have zero complaints, mc is hardworking and not overly cocky, has a supportive family which is a rare thing in the cultivation world, there are no face slapping moments so far, fights feel fleshed out and prepared, world building is coming along nicely, the mc isn’t powering up super quick, the side characters are entertaining and mysterious. this book has very little plot armor moments so far and it has been a great read
it is becoming much more interesting, here he reads more protagonists and humiliates him and it becomes a good villain novel after the I am fated villain .as you there baddas Villain .also plz brought some transmigrated protagonist so we can have some fear so that we do not transmigrated those novel in which the villain is father is also transmigrator with system. if any body has seen the novel is which one become the middle character in which he slay both protagonist and villain . yeah I had seen but I don't remember its name now
well performance of the story line in english translation
Good story, Dark and interesting to read. The character's design is amazing. MC is by far the best but still has a lot of potential. The writing was great. World background is also great. Overall this is worth the read.
I must say that this novel is interesting ?As a person who loves transmigration novels this one is good. (But I'm also a fujoshi so I can't help but ship the protagonist to other male characters)
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