Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you.Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand.As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up.And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues.Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development.This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story.First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.
For some weird reason, the author abandons the whole “hint” schtick and turns it into a generic urban cultivation novel a couple hundred chapters in. I wanted to see more of the hints, since that was an interesting mechanic to me and what drew me to the novel in the first place. But instead, the MC essentially became an arrogant cultivator with plot armor of invincibility +5.
I love the sadistic humor of madara so much probably bcs I have the same humor and I really like how the story flow is and Im so happy that this book has NO harem.
very good story even if I find that everything went a little too fast but it's ok, sukuna has also his personnality slighty changed but it's not just some random change, you should also develop a little more the dialogues and the background , otherwise until then I love it, hope you don't dropped
Wow, this was a surprising and delightful find as I had to scroll down quite a bit for it. The writing quality is fine, updates are pretty frequent, and everything about the story is decent.The Way of The Dao is underrated and I think it deserves way more views.I rated it as 5 stars because I believe that the author will continue to improve as the story progresses.
It's a good story, but I'm still waiting to see what's coming in the future....Henry is becoming an interesting character, but I think that the author could make the people who is a part of the story engage more, talking more, giving their opinions, etc...
Good story's foundationGood story's backgroundGood story's pacingGood character's interactionGood character's personalityGood character's backgroundGood ...Good ......Well, many good things can be reviewed from this novel especially the MC. Not to mention that this story is using a historical reference, which makes is becoming more interesting and moreover since the entrance of the mental girl, some medic terms can also be learnt from hereSince I have taken a liking towards the MC, his personality to be more specific, I hope that there won't be abrupt change to his personality and please NO NTR! since I absolutely hate that ****Last but not least, thanks for writing this amazing story and I have to say that your grammar is quite excellent, there's no need to degrade yourself that much since there's only some typo, but the story itself is enchanted further by the fluid grammar usedThe occassional references and jokes used are also good to keep the mood upOnce more, thanks for the novel**: I've rewritten the review for the fourth time since it always failed to post before
Started reading this and was delighted that it was actually in the Philippines! Hope our kabayans support our local author and I hope this garners more views from other places as well!
This is beautifully written, its beginning so intruguing. Can't wait to meet her mate.
Amazing I’m addicted
okay so either someone is tryna set raven up or get her attention either way it seems she might be in danger and so is aunty m I'm also hoping they find some way to deal with that dickhead of a father as for liam well anything can happen jush waiting on the next chapters to come..
I like the idea of the book title and started reading this