This has potential to be like top providence secretly cultivate for 1000 years so check it out hope it’s not trash past 20 chapters
I saw some sentence similar Google Translate.Example , In Chapter 49 - Liu Yan casually kicked Li Hao and chuckled.””This woman, stay away from me!Isn't it supposed to ''this woman , stay away from her''?And also Chapter 49 name is ''The superpower territory(3)''But Chapter 48 name is ''The superpower realm(2)''.????? Isn't so similar to GT?I think translator use help from GT?
This book has so much potential! The writing is so choppy and I'm not sure how to describe it, but I'm sure it will only get better as the story progresses. I've only read the first chapter, but I'm confident that the author will continue to improve and make this book even more amazing! Here's to hoping for a witty and joyful journey!
This novel was so good that I wanted to use an aggregator site, however I couldn't find it on any of them, good novel, 10/10 would recommend.
Really loving the novel so far. The MC is quite intelligent and shrewd. So far he is a shrewd businessman following the path of God Grid/Greed from Overgeared and actually becoming over-geared. He also reminds me of Felix from The Supremecy Games from his actions, sly tongue, and intelligence. The world resembles The Legendary Mechanic from how Sci-fi/ game like it is. Can't say if there is any magic or such yet though. I really hope this novel continues to completion, would be a shame if it was dropped.
From the first chapter until now I stuck with the story...I really enjoy to read it.... You really have done a very good work with your .amazing thrilling fun story ... I always wonder what will happen next...... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Definitely one of my favorites novels on the site.
- OP MC✔️
- Interesting plot✔️
- Interesting World(s)✔️
- Some nice Snu Snu (18+)✔️
- "Cruel" MC✔️
- "Intelligent MC✔️
- Daily update✔️✔️
- Harem ✔️
- Time traveling✔️
- And so much potential to explore✔️
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As I understand you're a beginner writer, I'll add 2 more stars to each review score, while the review part will show my actual evaluation.
Writing Quality 1: Definitely the novel’s biggest weak point. I hoped it would get better later as the writer gained more experience, but close to a hundred chapters in, and it remains practically the same. The only improvement I noticed was that you no longer alternated between Qin Feng and Feng Qin.
I would suggest using Grammarly and also breaking your sentences into smaller ones. Beyond that, all I can think of is for you to get an editor and/or improve your English.
Stability of Updates 5: Personally, I don't like this category, as sometimes the writer needs more time to finish up a chapter, but may end up sacrificing the quality to keep the release rate, so I always give it a 5.
Story Development 2: The story moves, though there are problems with fillers. Beyond that, there’s also the MC doing things that really don’t make sense.
MC meets Wukong, trains once and that’s it. I don’t think he’s ever shown training again, he simply becomes OP.
Group of gangster smashed his apartment, where his mother and sister live, and said they would come back the next morning. MC, who’s now capable of beating all of them by himself, simply lets them break into his home again, where his family is, before beating them.
His friend —and the one helping him in his revenge— is held hostage and MC does nothing against the kidnapper.
Also, the story is set on Earth, where the existence of cultivators (friars as they are called here) is unknown to the public.
That’s good and all, but then MC —who had never heard of Friars before— meets Wukong and in the next few hours he: meets some woman with an extremely rare cultivation body and witnesses a battle between two friars.
Then a few days later he stumbles into a trio of friars while he was getting revenge, and also witness another battle, this one so big that destroyed a building in the middle of the city.
It just seems impossible that their existences were really kept hidden for so long and still are.
Character Design 1: Characters barely have any depth to them, being mostly copies of one another.
Male characters are arrogant douchebags, who only know to abuse their power/wealth. Also they, and only they, feel the need for sex.
Female characters exist either to engage in sex with the arrogant douchebags or to almost being raped by them so that MC can come to their rescue.
Maybe one or other character isn’t such a copy, but they still lack any depth to them.
World Background 2: Again, the story is set on Earth with a secret cultivator society. We are shown a few glimpses into this cultivator world, but that’s it.
Review score (1+5+2+1+2)/5 = 2.2
Score given = (3+5+4+3+4)/5 = 3.8
A great novel full of character. It’s simply a amazing read making me smile and laugh reading through it all. I recommend this to you all and hope you can push this through trial read to the voting pool. However unlikely, this novel is great and deserves some attention
Books with such a plot is rare compared to the traditional xuanxuan books.Unlike most of books ,the author has written the book in such a way that the mc is that not much physically capable but has good mental prowess .such a plot is very rare and also characters are depicted just the right way ,(not too much not to little )
A really good book.
Mc here is clever and knows what to do. The story doesn't feel forced or anything.
I would recommend this novel.
I gave it 5 stars because it is so bad.
It is so bad to the extinct that i can't live without the daily realease.
It is so bad that i can't even stop rereading it.